listening to Laika (this one is for my friend Raphie)

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Open Poetry #34

listening to Laika (this one is for my friend Raphie)

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-01-22 11:14 PM

Listening to Laika, whining with merlot
wondering which way to go

Wondering whether or not
to go

yet the time is ripe
for growing...
for showing another side, another dimension

even if the skin I’m in is comfortable
yet it feels incomplete,
only partially sketched in
on the canvas of life

I am a still life

waiting for a new brushstroke,
a new pigment that never yet

existed

refreshing life’s meanings
for the world to see

something...someone

perhaps some thought that might be

unique

listening to

Laika.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2005-01-23 12:34 PM

Wondering whether or not
to go

stay. oh voice of the voiceless

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-01-23 12:39 PM

hugs to you, in echo
and Raph, I do appreciate your heartbeat

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2005-01-23 10:39 AM

even if the skin I’m in is comfortable
yet it feels incomplete,
only partially sketched in
on the canvas of life

Great lines, dear Kacy.

A hug to both.

Love, Margherita