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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Aimless wonder be rhythm Mix of music, winter magic Stirs your mind…every tune Working full count to remember Place to place From January to December Balloons White lace laughter Cottage with windows Listening to your sea Your mass Disneyland insight Sparks send light Warming life again Time again Tender again Life’s days are extraordinary You Touch eyes with mountains The Four seasons…. Ominous wonder Soaring high Touching me Touching you Touching us Mankind’s time writing language On woodwind & strings Bursting color, what is wild and mysterious? Caliber groups glittering dragonflies Leaping upward like translucent jewels Your words grow wings This world being a better place for it For the manly way of you Muse isolation, suffering, love, triumphs Amber quiet seeps within authentication Seraphim classics & image faced forests Are you the mocking bird of What would not listen? Whoosh, a gust of wind filling sails? Unknown whispers nibble my ear With interest and recognition….. You’re an out of body experience Prediction spinning on air…nirvana Tranquility on ice Painting green roll backs of time Summer’s care, remembering Naming us….moist couplets pretty high Tell me again…how you love me Refusing to live with regrets Incantations of a moment Quivering of scent…. I'll never never end this poem... [This message has been edited by LeeJ (01-18-2005 02:49 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh good grief girl... I hope you never end this poem either... |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh my - and it shouldn't end - I found myself smiling and feeling all fuzzy inside at the beauty it stirred in my heart - you pen some of the most incredible stuff - but this . . . You’re an out of body experience Prediction spinning on air…nirvana I absolutely love -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Such peaceful feelings you convery, LeeJ~ Much enjoyed the view and sweeping beauty~ |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
oh please dont end it, leaves you hungry for more. very nice lee  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Are you the mocking bird of What would not listen? Whoosh, a gust of wind filling sails? please do as you say... never ever end it! Fantastic Lee! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"I'll never never end this poem..." Good for you! Great one Lee J. JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wonderful!!!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
In your nightshirt are many passions and they seem to become better with every moment. Take care Lee Dave |
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