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Tiersdin
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0 posted 2004-12-20 06:53 PM



For one moment
you were mine

I knew at last
the perfect kiss
fallen sweet from
the vines of love
until souls smiled
in the here after glow
of what might have been


~tier
6/00

© Copyright 2004 R.T. Webster-Mosby - All Rights Reserved
Susan
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1 posted 2004-12-20 07:13 PM


simple, elegant - well penned

Susan

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DavePage
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2 posted 2004-12-20 07:18 PM


Like it a lot

Dave

Dark Angel
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3 posted 2004-12-20 07:29 PM


Marvelous Tier, absolutely.

Maree

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-12-20 08:26 PM


Lovely Tier~
Hugs, Nancy.

     Season's Greetings!

Nightshade
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just out of reach
5 posted 2004-12-20 09:38 PM


SIGH
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6 posted 2004-12-23 02:28 PM


merry christmas my friend..

may the year bring you love and peace to fill your heart and your home

Decaflame
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7 posted 2004-12-23 03:03 PM


For one moment

~*~

Sometimes we have to know
what moments to hold,
and which to let go...


Earth Angel
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8 posted 2004-12-23 03:21 PM


Aw, yes ~ the "quiet hunger"... May yours be sated, Dear Tier. Such an eloquent expression of longing.

Love & Light,
EA

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2004-12-23 09:23 PM


oh good one!
Ericc
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10 posted 2004-12-26 07:34 PM


Perfect.

Eric

Susan Caldwell
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11 posted 2004-12-27 11:56 AM


"For one moment.."

sometimes that is enough to last..

wonderful..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Kristabell
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12 posted 2004-12-27 12:13 PM


Oh! So sad, but very well written. Keep it up!
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13 posted 2004-12-27 05:55 PM


Amazing write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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14 posted 2005-01-19 09:31 PM


What a sweet little memory.....I'm glad I decided to start a few pages down instead of only looking for what was posted today....

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saved_by_grace
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15 posted 2005-01-19 09:35 PM


Beautifully written, Tiersin!   I loved it...and have experienced this a couple times.  SIGH...

Hugs,

Becka :}

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