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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-18 09:26 AM



you were the pretty poly
in your white hat
good girl with giggles

I was a cowboy
in my black hat and lasso
and sling shot jeans

we played silly tag
and you were it
most of the time

til the leghump puppy
yelped his mindless
and began chasing his tail

and even parked cars sometimes


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Dark


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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-01-18 09:34 AM



That rather steals the moment,
doesn't it?

Bad puppy....

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-18 09:41 AM


would like to take a gander of you in those jeans...hehehe

humor and wit suite you well....sometimes pinstripped, sometimes all pastels....

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2005-01-18 09:42 AM


o thos playground antics
wish i knew you back when...
i can just feel you pulling the girlie's pigtails only so you could kiss and make up
later on

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2005-01-18 10:38 AM


tag - you're it!


  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

[This message has been edited by Susan (01-18-2005 12:00 PM).]

Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
5 posted 2005-01-18 11:57 AM


This one gave me a reminiscent smile.  I like the way you paint the scene and the moment.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

6 posted 2005-01-18 08:40 PM


smiling

you've just got a way...

The first half of this reminded me of that old song--was it Sonny & Cher?

"You were five and I was six
we rode on horses made of sticks--"

Bang bang.

Somehow you always get around to that, huh?



Hadta pull your leg a bit, D.


*Alli4000*
Deputy Moderator 10 Tours
Member Elite
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188
The World of Poetry
7 posted 2005-01-18 11:41 PM


Enjoyed~

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Daniel J D
Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
8 posted 2005-01-19 02:07 AM


Just a moment, in words.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
9 posted 2005-01-19 05:27 AM


yeah

nice one

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