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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
childhood memories are far and few there's more missing than the love i never knew no matter how far i ran or how fast i walked there was something inside me that darkness wanted and stalked taking pieces of my heart as the innocense they stole making a little girl be a women under forced control with a will to grow and never become as they are with all their hate i wished upon many a star the sea called to me so i moved to be near where i found peace and one who loved me dear he helped me get over the torment and pain gave me the gift of life a son, family, made me his wife soon all that was taken away as was what was left of my heart that day my lifemy joy my son,a love i never knew i would never stop loving or believing in you a gift from god our creater above born on Easter along with my birth,his feel of love times where good times where bad tears of joy tears of sad then comes a time i will always remember i was saying i believe in god but self belief, never surrender late in the night i was awoken fear filled my room i couldnt move, nor words be spoken at the end of my bed i could sense him there so big and strong only darkness no face did he bare again i try to scream for my son while trying to reach for light a real struggle had just begun when all that mattered to me was my son a burst of strength and i became free as the light came on so did the words out of me this is the first of memories i have told next will be memories from the heart & soul I hold  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a very beautiful story and write...please keep penning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
MGROVES A beautiful write and I enjoyed the read. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
This is beautiful with a deep sense of sadness hiding within. Hope to read more, best marty |
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Endlessecho Member
since 2003-09-05
Posts 398I live within myself |
I was captured from the very beginning.. wonderful writing. I too longed for more. |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thankyou all so much for your replys i have a lot to get out, at times to much at once, fills my head, i am trying to see beyond the words, that come to me, starting with my own memory.and when it all began. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
An enjoyable though sad read. Getting things out is a long journey but know there are benefits at the end. Good luck! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
my friend, I ache this morning while reading this but I'm so glad you've found a place here that you can get it off your heavy heart, so keep writing know I'm here when you need love, Dixie |
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Snowflake From Hell Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777My own little Icey Oblivion |
wow everyone else said beautiful so im sayin wow  does your fire burn? can you hear me? ILL JUST KNOCK THIS WALL RIGHT DOWN |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
WoW...  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
 AMAZING write, MGROVES! Keep up the healing writing...God bless, Becka  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
when there are so many memories that try to hide, it can take a lifetime to set some of them free. But when you finally do, there is a sense of relief that rushes in to fill all those empty spots. Sending you warm thoughts of understanding, hoping you have found some comfort in writing this out...a catharsis. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Sad but so touching ... I only began wrting as few years ago too , its been much like therapy and helped me believe in me !!! Hope |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thank you all so much for your kind words of support and encouragment bless you all |
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