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LeeJ
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0 posted 2005-01-17 11:37 AM


Yarn spinner activity drove fascinated
Recoiling upright, repolished intellect
Never experiencing breakfast alone
My solitude grows more extreme
To which I confess, enjoys liberty
Slightly perverse…

Though, smiling at collected moods
And the good woman whose faults
Are not over stricken…with mocking tongues
Life and Heaven come to savor
As I go to the window each morning for crumbs
After all, I am from their tone and spirit
The all of me, whom men found as
To much woman…

Perhaps I am a vocalist of Venice
With domestic interests
Carrying some stone fanatical reverence
For the arts…

I am a marble of granite
Hewn into something which spring grew
Evading opposition, the hands of depression
And the spirits of fear
I am the runaway child
On a train to anywhere but here
So much regard to circumstance
Becomes invariably anxious
Like some new retreat
A bed and breakfast by the sea

It’s simply wearing beautiful silks
Pale sweet colors of afternoons
Wandering in the mind of nature
She gives me her autograph
In pictorial passages

Where I shall be if you call
I will stammer of course
When you stand in the entrance hall
Though I will try true politeness
Training curiosity
Sincerely mine
To a circle of defiance
Dwelling on the space given for growth

It is there I’ll take impression
Not in jealousy
Nor dislike…Never!
But in a space which facilitates good ghosts
Who are amused by intimate friends
The angel who guides me
Withholding nothing

Speaking fully of some deep sense
I’ve watched this for years
Thus stirred and overcome with humbleness
Childlike simplicity touches me
Like a husband of a deeper means

Scottish ballads written in granite
Singing of the Bonny morning where
Courage never fails
Witnessing a thousand rainbows...
Encouraging strangers to know green
The true believers of dreams
Sometimes faced with course evenings...
Yet, their wings shooting straight up towards heaven

© Copyright 2005 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2005-01-17 12:41 PM


Such a vastness of wanderings,  through so
many thoughts and places, faces...feelings
and much more...you amaze me.

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2005-01-17 02:10 PM


Wonderful read, LeeJ - thank you!
GG
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Lost in thought
3 posted 2005-01-18 03:34 AM


Definitely an excellent read...
full of images and pieces of
who you are and how you are.
Quite beautiful

And I love the title!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-01-18 03:41 AM


another great one from a wise soul  


JL
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5 posted 2005-01-19 04:04 PM


“Though, smiling at collected moods
And the good woman whose faults
Are not over stricken…with mocking tongues
Life and Heaven come to savor
As I go to the window each morning for crumbs
After all, I am from their tone and spirit
The all of me, whom men found as
To much woman…”

This is a story in itself.  And, I bet true, true, true!!
Great write Lee J.

JL


Martie
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6 posted 2005-01-19 05:09 PM


LeeJ

Amazing writing....I'd say angelic writing!  So enjoyed!  

Thomas119gold
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7 posted 2005-01-21 09:48 AM


Two thumbs up

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8 posted 2005-01-21 07:31 PM


Great write!!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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