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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
why must they take total control break your heart steal your soul never let you spread your wings and let your spirit fly laugh at your pain laugh when you cry never earn their own even with all you do or with love that's shown somethings lacking respect take you down then reject wants to stay high no matter how much it hurts no matter how much you cry can't control their life,or what they do so they have a need to control all around,including you when what they do controls them each day the more they control nd let no one get i their way |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marsha, this is a powerful flow of words that reveal your being conscious of something that can't be allowed to last, as it hurts you too much. You are ready to bloom on a different level, my dear friend. You are beautiful and you have tried enough to mend. You are meant to BE love. Great poem and I dare say ... a healing write! Love and hugs. Margherita  |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Control...mmm...people like this too often irritate me. None controls my destiny. LOL! Oh...don't I wish. I understand where this is coming from Mgroves. Very well written piece you have here. Glad I popped in to read it this morning. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
margarita bless you for your inspiring reply hugs back at ya  E thankyou |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Good words Marsha. I can't stand control freaks either. dave |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow . . . ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
dave thankyou i am really tired of control freaks, sadly alot more today or kids controling their parents to do as they please and dont care who or what they trash like they think someone owes them. really sad when drugs or alcohal or more important than human life . any kind of controlling person sucks. A thankyou |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Immaturity gives birth to many things, most not good or healthy...and too many kids, too many adults are behaving just that way. It is sad and not fun. Sorta this way, when they are immature...they are insecure and that sucks...for sure! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Send them on their way...James |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
MGROVES, how very true this is. It's taken me a long time to learn, but we can make choices not to allow them to control us.  ....jo |
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Thomas119gold Senior Member
since 2002-06-03
Posts 708Biloxi, MS (city by the sea) |
I am really impressed with this writing i hope to see more of it. Tom |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
thank you all for your kind replies |
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