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0 posted 2005-01-18 12:18 PM


That Essential Stillness

There is nothing to seek, nothing to call,
And there are no spirits to placate at all.
No cards to turn over, nothing to win,
An essential stillness, a something within
That the dark brings to light like a star.

When the crush that should never come, comes;
Just then, in the moment the spirit succumbs,
One part of it holds, an implacable hush
At the center in spite of the whirl and the rush,
Sparkling quiet inside, where the real things are.

No, nothing to seek, nothing to call,
And surely no spirits to placate at all.
No spirits that is, except one,
In the essence of stillness, already begun,
That the dark will bring forth like a star.



© Copyright 2005 Ed Ratledge - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-18 02:28 AM


Ed

I think this may be one of my favorite poems of yours...and that's hard, because as you know, there are so many that are very special.  This is just so well done!  Applause!  

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2 posted 2005-01-18 02:50 AM


depends on which spirit your seeking
as there are many from far and near
enjoyed your words as  i learn from them  thanks


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3 posted 2005-01-18 05:24 AM


keeping this
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4 posted 2005-01-18 06:20 AM


Sparkling quiet inside, where the real things are.


Yes, and that's when one realizes his/her own bestest friend....

Tremendous write...

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5 posted 2005-01-18 09:36 AM


Sometimes thing that comes is pleasant...
and other times it's the last thing one would want.
Always it is honest.
And yes, always it is essential.

LOVE this!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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6 posted 2005-01-18 10:15 AM


Love this read!  great writing...

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

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7 posted 2005-01-18 02:53 PM


And you find what you are made of, when the dark illuminates.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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8 posted 2005-01-18 03:01 PM


without the dark, how then would we know the light is beautiful?  Enjoyed this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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9 posted 2005-01-18 03:02 PM


This one is a very special one Ed.  This is perfect.
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10 posted 2005-01-18 03:13 PM


came back again


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11 posted 2005-01-18 03:19 PM


When the crush that should never come, comes;
Just then, in the moment the spirit succumbs,
One part of it holds, an implacable hush
At the center in spite of the whirl and the rush,
Sparkling quiet inside, where the real things are.

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So true, there is no placating what is real!  
Enjoyed the wisdom in your words, Ed~
Thank you, thank you~


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12 posted 2005-01-18 08:14 PM


Peace - something we all need

This was so smoothly written

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13 posted 2005-01-18 08:25 PM


and done with grace too...

a fine read from you this evening, sir.

But then, you are dependable that way.

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14 posted 2005-01-19 08:23 AM


very uplifting Ed.....

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15 posted 2005-01-19 09:43 AM


When the crush that should never come, comes;
Just then, in the moment the spirit succumbs,
One part of it holds, an implacable hush
At the center in spite of the whirl and the rush,
Sparkling quiet inside, where the real things are.

~*~

I have circled and read this several times...
It's not always easy to find the essentials...
sometimes we need direction.

So, this is a
because its directions are flawless.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

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16 posted 2005-01-19 11:25 AM


Excellent write in thought, word, and rhyme!
Yes, there is something about stillness!  When I grew up, it seemed there were still moments, but as I become older and the world has "progressed so", it seems those moments have to be sought.  Sometimes, I forget their importance!  

Thanks for sharing, Ed.  This is among my favorites, too.

          cathy

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17 posted 2005-01-24 12:55 PM


And when the master of free verse chooses rhyme... the result is beyond sublime. *S*

At the center in spite of the whirl and the rush,
Sparkling quiet inside, where the real things are.

We find this place through different paths... sometimes, we're whirled there by the chaos... other times, we're led to the calm. We may not even know we need such a destination until we arrive... but then... as you've said... we know the real.

This isn't just one of your best, my friend... it's one of poetry's best. *S*

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18 posted 2005-01-24 07:31 PM


Love this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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19 posted 2005-01-24 08:40 PM


Enjoyed...James
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20 posted 2005-01-24 09:11 PM


Many good words here, but these are my favorite:
"When the crush that should never come, comes;
Just then, in the moment the spirit succumbs,"

Dealing with the unimagineable is always unthinkable.  Well done.  Ken

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

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21 posted 2005-01-25 03:58 AM


I enjoyed the rhyme, which is unusal for me....great poem.
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22 posted 2005-01-25 09:37 AM


Rhyme should be safe, legal and rare......

I rhymed every poem when I was a kid -- the oldest one I've found that wasn't rhymed, was of a dream I'd had sometime in my mid-teens. I actually posted it here, I think, but I'm not sure. Now when I write with rhyme, I find myself mainly avoiding the things about it that will make me feel immature......

We have the tradition of rhyme in poetry from countries whose languages are rich in rhyme. For all its strength in other ways, English is rhyme-poor.

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23 posted 2005-01-25 11:39 AM


Very beautiful Ed.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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