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Kiss Me Until it Hurts
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Kiss Me Until it Hurts |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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Stark, there on my bed. An envelope baring your name for return should it not make its destination. It had found its way. Bringing with it a rush of memories and a too soon goodbye. A mix of yes I remember, please leave me be, maybe another time and never again. It was the CD you knew I wanted you remembered yet I was disappointed. No, “baby I miss you, I made a mistake, I’m coming for you.” Just the Cranberries greatest hits singing of missing, loving and lingering. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
No, “baby I miss you, I made a mistake, I’m coming for you.” I feel this one Susan. sigh...  let the tunes melt it away gal... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
love that little girls big voice on the cranberries achy breaky heart it is as your melancholy sings so sweetly here |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Susan, this was tender and sweet |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
damn.... will trade you a willie nelson live for that one? enjoyed this soul of you susan |
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RSWells Member Elite
since 2001-06-17
Posts 2533 |
The music lingers beyond the singers. No end to it is there? Enjoyed Poets against the war is redundant |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
So very clear... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
True to life. I felt by reading your poem that I was able to share just a little tiny bit of your life... Your Honesty here is very very special and I do hope that you get what you truly wanted.... (hmmmm) the Limited Edition with the Bonus CD. (Smiles) Good job. -Bob |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
this one cut deep, as i recently found some old letters.. hugs in lighter news, injuries have healed, games may commence grins. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Wow. ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I wouldn't mind getting kissed until it hurt...James |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
If it hurts, they say, you aren't doing it right (LOL)! Smile woman... You have much to be so proud of here. TD |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Laughing at TD - hehe But this poem - sad, yet beautifully expressed - hugs SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Susan, you have a way of really getting the point across in all you write. I liked the way you ended this one.  .....jo |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"It had found its way. Bringing with it a rush of memories and a too soon goodbye." you made the tears well up with this... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you everyone. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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