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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-17 06:27 PM



then there was that page
you turned to in your thoughts
with damp licked fingers
that tasted like your smile

yes, I marked them for you
the places to read
with your eyes half closed
and your lips pretending

just to be finger tip sighs
scanning the vulpine brail
of my smoothest suggestions
that you say are shameful at times

but with your eyes closed
it may be ok to just imagine
as long as you don't say them
out loud or let them dwell

in the delicacy of your open mind

_____________

Dark

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Sunshine
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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
1 posted 2005-01-17 06:30 PM



Wicked...ly good.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2005-01-17 08:24 PM


oh, what's rolling around behind these eyeballs

LOL

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
3 posted 2005-01-17 08:52 PM


had to look up Vulpine - you teach me something new every day

I agree with Sunshine - your wicked is showing -

  Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
4 posted 2005-01-18 01:05 AM


Foxes...yes....you have a way with words, my good man....a rollicking unabashed way with words. I wanna do that too!



~~J

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-01-18 08:32 AM


but with your eyes closed
it may be ok to just imagine
as long as you don't say them
out loud or let them dwell

in the delicacy of your open mind

hehe, I'm thinking it might be nice to say them outloud...to that special someone...you do taught and tease...your like my grand-daughter...bad boy, bad boy!!!!  hehehhehe

Hugs for another amazing write

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