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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2005-01-17 07:10 AM


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I browse the lilac mountain scene
And valley’s forty shades of green
I wallow in the prize of stare
And breathe the sweetness of the air

A place that fills my mind with seem
And gallops through my nights of dream
A magic garden made from store
A doorway to my evermore

Illusions of a childhood stay
A place of love and childish play
A place that wraps me in its kind
A place that takes away the blind

A temple and a Shangri-la
A place of peace beneath a star
The spirit of a phantom dwell
The contents of my wishing well

The pathway to my search and goal
And the doorway to my soul



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2005-01-17 07:13 AM


Good Morning Sy...lovely to read you first thing....your candy heart and mind are showing, you know....and I adift in your words...lovely penning sir...gives a new meaning to the words Monday Morning

Hugs

Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-01-17 08:53 AM



There you are,
playing with my greens again...






Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2005-01-17 01:37 PM


enjoying this one very much
Janet Marie
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4 posted 2005-01-17 08:27 PM


I browse the lilac mountain scene
And valley’s forty shades of green
I wallow in the prize of stare
And breathe the sweetness of the air

A place that fills my mind with seem
And gallops through my nights of dream
A magic garden made from store
A doorway to my evermore


===========================


I'll met you there Sy-babers...
Randy knows the way..

Crazy day here... been running around in the cold and snow... were are in the teens!!! send me some Florida warmth and waves.. LOL
*ww*

Among the kingdom of the winds ...
perhaps there is one of elegant mind,
who has no need to intrude on the solitude of single things.

CB

passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2005-01-17 10:11 PM


good evening Sy
yes, better late than never

lovely write tonight

ice
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Pennsylvania
6 posted 2005-01-17 10:23 PM


"..... the doorway to my soul

That it is, my friend, that it is....

Very nice poem, as always...enjoyed reading and thinking about it.

_____________ice/ford
   ><>


saved_by_grace
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In the arms of God...
7 posted 2005-01-17 10:43 PM


This was so beautiful, Sy!  Will be saving this one!   

God bless, m'friend!

Becka

Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
8 posted 2005-01-18 07:54 AM


LeeJ
My pleasure to have you read me.

Sunshine
One of my favorite colors. Hugs

Midnitesun
Thank you dear.

JM,
That's a date and Randy knows the way.
Winkiewinkie

passing,
Thanks for the lovely. Hugs

ice,
Enjoyed your read and comment, thank you.

Becka,
God bless you, m'friend.

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