Coloring Passions (GS Challenge)

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Susan Caldwell
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0 posted 2005-01-16 07:37 PM

you are the one made from two

cool and lost
bright and bold
together they swirl
to bring hope and longing

you color my absence of true
with the desire of could be
and I wear you around the essense
of who I was, who I am and who I will become

I favor you, for you have always been with me
you have colored my disappointments with better tomorrows
and you have let me weep with cleansing tears

you represent the loss and hurt of a broken heart
yet comfort me with knowing the existance
of life and love

you are the one made from two

____________________

you must guess what color I speak of..

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

wranx
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1 posted 2005-01-16 07:56 PM

I can't hazard a guess...other than I think the color lacks blue.

Nice write though!

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

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2 posted 2005-01-16 08:10 PM

Loved this...
I am thinking green, for hope.
Hugs,
TD

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2005-01-16 08:17 PM

Thank you Ed! (the color represents longing to me as longing seems to be hurt but still hopeful. Maybe I just think too much)

TD~ It's not a primary color.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2005-01-16 08:39 PM

susana
im taking a wild guess on
the color purple
its a bath of spirit and soul
for me, anyhow

but i love your words, purple, yellow, or whatever.........they wrapped round me in
celebration of life

Lighthousebob
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5 posted 2005-01-16 08:45 PM

Had me guessing... actually went back to read a few of your other poems to try and figure this one out... I liked this poem and I liked your poem "Do Over" by the way because there was a lot of color in that poem too... but, now that you've responded... the color "longing" gets my vote for sure. You have described longing very very well here for certain. -Bob

Susan Caldwell
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Florida

6 posted 2005-01-16 08:56 PM

you are the one made from two

cool and lost = blue
bright and bold= red

Thank you Michele!

and thank you Mr. Bob...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2005-01-16 09:02 PM

you're very welcome

Aenimal
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8 posted 2005-01-16 10:53 PM

mishy bet me to it but i swear i had it..regardless, great writing. hugs

Susan Caldwell
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Florida

9 posted 2005-01-17 12:52 PM

sure you did....

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

Midnitesun

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Gaia

10 posted 2005-01-17 09:15 PM

colorful write, bold and cool

Aenimal
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11 posted 2005-01-17 11:39 PM

did too..have a helmet of the same colour..

Gentle Spirit
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12 posted 2005-01-18 06:19 AM

Ok. Tell me if I am wrong, but I am guessing the color of love? Or did I just read more into this than what was there. Sounds like a soft warm blue to me. Susan, this is absolutely lovely and thank you for rising to and above the challenge. Hugs gal.

LeeJ
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13 posted 2005-01-18 06:22 AM

you color my absence of true
with the desire of could be
and I wear you around the essense
of who I was, who I am and who I will become

spiritual tone...hehe

tremendous ponderings...loved this

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

14 posted 2005-01-18 09:14 AM

LMAO@Raph...that is sick and I love it!

Thank you everyone.

The color is purple...blue and red...blue for the feeling of loss and hurt, red for hope and love..together to me, they represent longing...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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