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Coloring Passions (GS Challenge)
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Coloring Passions (GS Challenge) |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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you are the one made from two cool and lost bright and bold together they swirl to bring hope and longing you color my absence of true with the desire of could be and I wear you around the essense of who I was, who I am and who I will become I favor you, for you have always been with me you have colored my disappointments with better tomorrows and you have let me weep with cleansing tears you represent the loss and hurt of a broken heart yet comfort me with knowing the existance of life and love you are the one made from two ____________________ you must guess what color I speak of.. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I can't hazard a guess...other than I think the color lacks blue. Nice write though! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Loved this... I am thinking green, for hope. Hugs, TD |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Thank you Ed! (the color represents longing to me as longing seems to be hurt but still hopeful. Maybe I just think too much)  TD~ It's not a primary color. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
susana im taking a wild guess on the color purple its a bath of spirit and soul for me, anyhow but i love your words, purple, yellow, or whatever.........they wrapped round me in celebration of life |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Had me guessing... actually went back to read a few of your other poems to try and figure this one out... I liked this poem and I liked your poem "Do Over" by the way because there was a lot of color in that poem too... but, now that you've responded... the color "longing" gets my vote for sure. You have described longing very very well here for certain. -Bob |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
you are the one made from two cool and lost = blue bright and bold= red Thank you Michele! and thank you Mr. Bob... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you're very welcome |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
mishy bet me to it but i swear i had it..regardless, great writing. hugs |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
 sure you did...."cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
colorful write, bold and cool |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
did too..have a helmet of the same colour.. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ok. Tell me if I am wrong, but I am guessing the color of love? Or did I just read more into this than what was there. Sounds like a soft warm blue to me. Susan, this is absolutely lovely and thank you for rising to and above the challenge. Hugs gal. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you color my absence of true with the desire of could be and I wear you around the essense of who I was, who I am and who I will become spiritual tone...hehe tremendous ponderings...loved this |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
LMAO@Raph...that is sick and I love it! Thank you everyone. The color is purple...blue and red...blue for the feeling of loss and hurt, red for hope and love..together to me, they represent longing... "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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