Open Poetry #34 |
Aiedo |
EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
Aiedo, Love upon Loves. Your heart. Your Love. What you call "Love" is so much more. Worlds upon worlds. We tape over the last one. Our universe, a tape cassette. Aiedo, From person to person. From age to age. From face to face, Dill, nutmeg and sage. From all that was done, and all that was said. Is there anything left to be done? Aiedo, Look in the mirror. Who is that person? Look in the mirror. Who are you? Take a deep breath. The world is yours. Take a step back. A whole life ahead. Aiedo, You must learn to love the stranger you are in this strangest of worlds among strangers. The nameless streets. These boundless skies. ..so cold and distant.. Your feelings, stay unknown to you. Aiedo, Angel of angels. Possibilities. Snenarios. Paralell realities. Afterlives. Feelings. Incarnations. Rain. "Nay, I am but a man," said He. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Not sure I understand this one. Is Aiedo a game? |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This one is a song. At first I didn't get it, and then it started singing itself, and it's beautiful. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
not only a song, but absolute and beautifully written and felt...well done! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes it is beautiful and and understood |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
interesting write eagle |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed this! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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