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kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

0 posted 2004-11-06 08:28 PM

grey clouds storm past moon
threaten to hide its glamour
moon shines, undeterred
untouched aura surrounds it~
light trumps over dark

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

1 posted 2004-11-06 08:30 PM

BRAVO! a fine write from one of my favorite Pipsters!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2004-11-06 08:36 PM

have to agree with midnight...very well written.

jwesley

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2004-11-06 08:46 PM

Kaile~
How much I enjoy your smile~
And ... your poetry STILL ROCKS, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-11-06 09:05 PM

good to see you again

wonderful write!

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

5 posted 2004-11-06 10:01 PM

this is very good. enjoyed very much.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2004-11-06 10:03 PM

Wow, cool way to put it my friend! Enjoyed.

jwesley

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

7 posted 2005-01-18 10:32 AM

cool! I can see it happening! great imagery...

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

8 posted 2005-01-18 12:25 PM

I think the light always trumps the dark. I like the scene you paint with your words here.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

9 posted 2005-01-18 01:14 PM

Becha when God read this poem he said..."hmmmm, it's nice to be the King!" In a humble way of course....

Good to see you and read you again

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-01-18 04:26 PM

yes this is very nice

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2005-01-18 05:28 PM

Enjoyed...James

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2005-01-18 09:10 PM

nice write kaile

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

13 posted 2005-01-18 10:46 PM

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

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