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latearrival
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0 posted 2005-01-17 05:12 PM



Days on a calendar
Crossed off one by one,
And still you sleep.

Sister and brothers stand by your side,
Tears flow from each and seem
to mingle with your own.

If tears alone could wash away your pain,
What a miracle it would be.... mom
August 9th 2004


My first post.written to my daughter who had a near fatal accident, marty


© Copyright 2005 martyjo - All Rights Reserved
EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2005-01-17 05:54 PM


i hope shes okay now.
Sunshine
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2 posted 2005-01-17 06:26 PM



Marty...this gave me chills...

and you cannot imagine how pleased I am
to see your first ever post!


*Alli4000*
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3 posted 2005-01-17 06:41 PM




~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2005-01-17 10:34 PM


oh my, I hope that she is OK
heart hugs to you

passing shadows
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5 posted 2005-01-17 10:37 PM


oh marty....you know you are both in my prayers and in my heart, always


James_A_Fraser
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6 posted 2005-01-18 01:03 AM


What a poignant way to begin....



~~J

latearrival
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7 posted 2005-01-18 05:45 AM


Thank you Sunshine for the gentle push.Thank you all for reading and comenting. As a newbi I was very hesitant to post. best, marty
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