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bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

0 posted 2005-01-17 07:45 AM

From worn playground walls
I picked out her name
as the years clicked 25,

She became a blonde,
once sunkissed
now brown again
as mine,

I found her
then lost her
because of
stubborn pride,

but her hand
to behold, she
had forced back
on mine,

So without
faint misgivings,

we raise
our toast
to the gift
of life's turning tides.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-01-17 07:49 AM

very sweet~~

M

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2005-01-17 08:00 AM

yes they turn
again and again
like blondes to browns
and browns to blond
but the beaches of rockaway still remain

so just sit back, hit your little white ball, enjoy your florida sunshine and laugh at us shoveling what you left behind, this morning
thanks

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

3 posted 2005-01-17 07:39 PM

I enjoyed this so much!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-01-17 09:17 PM

loved this
shoveled moments and all

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2005-01-17 09:50 PM

neat write

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

6 posted 2005-01-17 11:11 PM

bklynboy...this was a beautiful write!

we raise
our toast
to the gift
of life's turning tides.

Glad to see that it turned for the better!

Take Care...

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

7 posted 2005-01-18 12:56 PM

Men feel too. We try so hard to hide it, but really we only end up looking silly when we try....though heaven help us if we ever admit that we know it!

Poignant and cleanly written...I like this.

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MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

8 posted 2005-01-18 02:17 AM

very nice thanks for sharing

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

9 posted 2005-01-18 10:13 AM

very cool..what a story

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

10 posted 2005-01-18 04:19 PM

Pride is a double edged sword, to defend with all our might,
and yet so often our worst enemy.

Loved the happy ending, bklynboy~

mytuesdaywishes
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 254
a voice from the musicbox

11 posted 2005-01-18 05:09 PM

great imagery and feeling in the moment.

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

12 posted 2005-01-19 07:47 AM

Thanks all for the kind words....nice to be back!

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