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~K~
Member

since 2004-07-27

Posts 148

0 posted 2004-10-31 05:30 AM

I am the dream
afraid to wake;
the echo of a
warped imagination.
I am what happens
when nothing happens.
I am the heart
pounding silence,
waiting,
frozen.
I am the
subtle pause,
fixed
for the
duration.
I am the
death
of progress.

[This message has been edited by ~K~ (10-31-2004 06:20 AM).]

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2004-10-31 06:46 AM

Wow! Yes!
Powerfully expressed!
Love, Margherita

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-10-31 07:39 AM

i agree, this is powerful....
but the type of power you find when depths are too dark and you get pulled into the black.....a very sad place to be...

and you have written of it succinctly

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2004-10-31 07:48 AM

~K~
Nobody stops they get dragged along, sometimes kicking and screaming. LOL Strong write

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2004-10-31 09:47 AM

excellent write, enjoyed the thoughts

sadly, 'progress'....all too often involves the destruction of something that is far more positive than what 'progress' offers

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

5 posted 2004-10-31 09:56 AM

Mmm I love this. It makes me think of two lines and I quote here...

I am the alpha and the omega,
the beginning and the end.

This poem is powerful. It makes one think...what am I? If I had to describe myself what would I say? Well in my case it would probably be...

I am the worn out sneakers,
The crack in your heart...(wink!)

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

6 posted 2004-10-31 10:20 AM

This certainly makes you sit and think a
bit...wondering which step is your last.

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

7 posted 2004-10-31 10:44 AM

~K~
I fear you have written this for me
and now I'm looking over my shoulder
wondering how you know...

K

dgvarner
Member Elite

since 2000-05-13

Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida

8 posted 2005-01-17 02:07 PM

interesting write...I enjoyed..

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

9 posted 2005-01-17 07:32 PM

Love this K!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

10 posted 2005-01-17 07:40 PM

well done

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2005-01-17 08:37 PM

hey you found my psyche profile..

you continue to impress

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2005-01-17 10:08 PM

wow

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

13 posted 2005-01-18 09:00 PM

needs to be up top

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