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vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2005-01-16 08:28 PM




wicked...wicked
dance the dread of
spirits fed on
innocents in
happenstance of
hapless stance and
restless days in
wait of
dead
and buried deep
beneath the growing
of the knowing
of the worth, the
virgin lies in
sheltered keep
within her sleep
of dreams unfed
and purity is
fantasy as
echoed in the
voice of
mime

circle...circle...
shuffle feet in
wicked
wicked
dance of
time


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Another repost... just because...

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2005-01-16 08:36 PM


shuffling in
m'dear...
to say I'll dance this dance
if we dread


all of what lays ahead

together...

got it?

Yep...knew you would.  

Martie
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2 posted 2005-01-16 11:10 PM


Vicky!  You've got rhythm!  
passing shadows
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3 posted 2005-01-17 05:20 AM


cool write
Magnus
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4 posted 2005-01-17 12:17 PM


Repost, smepost...so what!! Love the beat..
Oh yeah...I do, I do....

dgvarner
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5 posted 2005-01-17 01:21 PM


Always enjoy a Vicky read
Repost or not, an awesome write!

hugs, g

"Everybody just wants to get high...sit and watch a perfect world go by..." (T.McGraw)

Poet deVine
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6 posted 2005-01-19 09:57 PM




This is a great play on word sounds (don't you just love words?)..and the beat is awesome!!! Enjoyed this!

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