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ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....

0 posted 2005-01-16 07:39 AM


  
It dangled temptingly
It sparkled
Catching my eye
Making me wonder.

Was it hope?

I grabbed it
Before it could vanish
And there was blood.

My heart in ribbons
Twirling and swirling
Giddily as I let go again.

It was a knife they used
To rip open the stitches
Of newly healing wounds.

Time to start again.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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Margherita
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1 posted 2005-01-16 10:18 AM



This is very powerful.
Indeed, there are sometimes such painful setbacks, but what counts in the end is that we never lose hope and that we are able to start again.
Beautiful.
Love, Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2005-01-16 10:24 AM


ESP
Interesting write, enjoyed the read.

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3 posted 2005-01-16 08:16 PM


Lizzie...

I'm sorry they couldn't just leave it alone and let you heal...I hope this works out for the best.

MGROVES
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4 posted 2005-01-16 08:23 PM


   i truly know this and have learned to learn from the experiance and not dwell in anger or pain  even though pain can be very deep and hard to heal  you just got to be strong and believe in yourself and mankind and have hope just think of the good you got from that one and be thankfull somethings just arent meant to be  but at least it always brings something new into our life  along with a little wisdom or knowledge  to carrie on


ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....
5 posted 2005-01-17 05:26 AM


Thanks for the replies everybody. I am doing ok again now, managed to refocus again. Gotta be like a daisy in the grass and bounce back up when trampled. Doing my best.

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

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