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lucky
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0 posted 2005-01-16 04:24 AM



how often
have we heard what a picture
is worth how the artist with pastel blemish
and blush is able to transcend poets imagination of
such & how many times have I heard about this poet
or that gifted with silver words and golden pen and
how they eclipse the artist touch by simply
applying some mottled laurels with
ascetic splash darkened
ink and a little
creativity

and come... tell me how is it they
so easily parch our hearts with spiritual visions
lulling within the wells that leap through minds window
& race along synaptic tangled lines splashing passions
spice on a riotous littoral tide that sends neurons
arcing to embrace the gestalt of
visions reverie

for a terse instant
we approach the concise
arcane and gaze through their
eyes reading their thoughts as
clairvoyant breakers swell in
urgency wiling about still
embraced in our
initial skim
and..

we’re
soaked left on
the edge of their creation

Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again...
~Rosemary J. Gwaltney~


© Copyright 2005 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2005-01-16 05:23 AM


Hey Dale!

WHere have you been? Glad you're back! I've missed your creations!

DavePage
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2 posted 2005-01-16 07:25 AM


I really like this.

Dave

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3 posted 2005-01-23 10:38 AM


I'm there right now.

Beautifully done, Lucky....there's a feel to these poems of yours that is unique, and almost addictive.

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Susan
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4 posted 2005-01-23 11:33 AM


This is fine - mighty fine - loved your thoughts and ponderings -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

MGROVES
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5 posted 2005-01-23 12:18 PM


Bravo


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6 posted 2005-01-23 12:23 PM


I loved this creation

Hope

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7 posted 2005-01-23 03:55 PM


Great write!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Marge Tindal
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8 posted 2005-01-23 08:26 PM


LUCKY !!!!

I'm gonna ditto my RatLeader here ... addictive, yes ... that's it exactly~

Sending my love to you and Rosemary and the entire gosh-darned family~

I'm still out here ... same reliable email addy~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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