Open Poetry #34 |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
how often have we heard what a picture is worth how the artist with pastel blemish and blush is able to transcend poets imagination of such & how many times have I heard about this poet or that gifted with silver words and golden pen and how they eclipse the artist touch by simply applying some mottled laurels with ascetic splash darkened ink and a little creativity and come... tell me how is it they so easily parch our hearts with spiritual visions lulling within the wells that leap through minds window & race along synaptic tangled lines splashing passions spice on a riotous littoral tide that sends neurons arcing to embrace the gestalt of visions reverie for a terse instant we approach the concise arcane and gaze through their eyes reading their thoughts as clairvoyant breakers swell in urgency wiling about still embraced in our initial skim and.. we’re soaked left on the edge of their creation Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Hey Dale! WHere have you been? Glad you're back! I've missed your creations! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I really like this. Dave |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I'm there right now. Beautifully done, Lucky....there's a feel to these poems of yours that is unique, and almost addictive. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
This is fine - mighty fine - loved your thoughts and ponderings - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
Bravo |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I loved this creation Hope |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LUCKY !!!! I'm gonna ditto my RatLeader here ... addictive, yes ... that's it exactly~ Sending my love to you and Rosemary and the entire gosh-darned family~ I'm still out here ... same reliable email addy~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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