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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-01-21 10:57 AM

I know quite soon
my pen may leak of ink
your name, with one
too many sugared roses,

and i may surmise with eyes
upon deciphered stars,
such language
of romantic scriptings,
where i may return to climb,
once more to realign you,

and perhaps, i'll listen
to the nights calypso
that plays this heart
of your enchantment,

as the parasol of twilight
rings my eyes
in your blue heaven,

until the borrowed sky
above falls shattered,
and once again
on wounded knees,
i scrape the ground
and pick the remants
of this once lived magic,

but tonight
as evening follows,
the 5 star studded hours,
where i was blessed
to drink your sin
and now write you pretty
as confetti covered roses,

o, and of that time
we had, my dear,
it was simply,
o so lovely.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2005-01-21 11:01 AM

and i may surmise with eyes,
upon deciphered stars
such language of romantic scriptings
where i may have to climb
to find you,

isn't that always the case? and that climb seems to get harder with age

hugs
M

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2005-01-21 11:01 AM

and perhaps, i'll listen
to the nights calypso
that plays this heart
of your enchantment,

oh, that was so pretty, as the entire poem was, but this was my favorite...lovely write

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2005-01-21 11:02 AM

until the sky above
falls shattered,
and once again on wounded
knees, that scrape the ground
and pick the remants
of this once touched magic,

oh this aches Michelle. It tugs...

RSWells
Member Elite

since 2001-06-17

Posts 2533

4 posted 2005-01-21 11:56 AM

This is lovely. Maybe it will be a slipper and not fall so harshly.

Poets against the war is redundant

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

5 posted 2005-01-21 12:09 PM

enjoyed

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

6 posted 2005-01-21 05:11 PM

and i may surmise with eyes
upon deciphered stars,
such language
of romantic scriptings,
where i may return to climb,
once more to realign you,

love this, hell I love it all.

Mxx

and i knew in the crystalline knowledge of you
~Buckingham/Nicks

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

7 posted 2005-01-21 05:52 PM

Very, very nice!
Enjoyed.

JL

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

8 posted 2005-01-21 07:30 PM

Enjoyed this!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

9 posted 2005-01-21 10:09 PM

beautifull

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2005-01-22 05:54 PM

Each of your writes brings blossom to the rose Michelle.
Beautiful images.
TD

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

11 posted 2005-01-23 04:02 PM

as the parasol of twilight
rings my eyes
in your blue heaven,

until the borrowed sky
above falls shattered,
and once again

This is awful pretty Michele.
Your choice of words is so wonderfully vivid,
as you continue to blossom, a beautiful blonde.

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

12 posted 2005-01-23 07:56 PM

"where i may return to climb,
once more to realign you"

Well said Michele.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

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