Open Poetry #34 |
somewhere inside |
lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
writing seasons that I hear a conscious peripheral stares out there every move near or far a quiet sort of guy saying nothing ‘oft times a hidden cry stirs the curtains sway autumns lullaby flowing winds of dry leaves in uncertainty weather ever real never too suspicious but wonders from time to time whether you can feel how isolated its daze do you know beyond the gaze......... hello..? nighttime comes all too soon the day is gone along with tune eyes search corners dark like a morning dawn never notice even one silent feeling grows inside crescent moon doesn’t really mind you didn’t know wasn’t trying to hide but still longed to proclaim maybe explain why talking it over somewhere inside cry variation idly fills the spaces... deviations modification... it was so blind of me carelessly affirming I’ve seen the faces read the gifted few some escaped the places blue led inside stifled time break the games break the chains of mind break the rush of autumn unwind watch the fall snow Speaking of ghosts, wouldn't you know here comes mine again... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! nice ending! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Lucky!! It is really good to see you and read your words. You always inspire me!! Give RG a hug for me and take one for yourself! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed this! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Nobody does it like you do....nobody! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Fascinating in rhythm and content! Love, Margherita |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
excellant enjoyed this one |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MyFriend~ Lucky am I to have you here~ day is gone along with tune eyes search corners dark like a morning dawn never notice even one silent feeling grows inside crescent moon doesn’t really mind you didn’t know wasn’t trying to hide but still longed to proclaim maybe explain why talking it over somewhere inside cry' Breathtaking word-beauty~ Your poetic pretties warm my heart this night~ *Huglets* to the family~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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