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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you dipped your pen in my skin and wet the end in a tattoo you wore your parchment armor with thigh high margins that seamed kind of sexy seamless seemed less, heals too in heels you didn't need at the top of my stares but the stairs were lovelier when you were their reason and your coming down was my going up to heaven ______________ dark |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
You written something that is good but it is almost as if you are trying to put people off from reading. I can follow the change of spellings and ideas and it has power, under-currents and un-explored images but it does seem as if you dont want people to read it. Dave |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
baby you drip your pen sublime siphon some ink from me and dip me, one more time |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
dave..thanks guy..it is intentional yes ____________________ ms inky, thanks lady for your eyes |
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Catrina Member
since 2004-11-10
Posts 132 |
A whole new interpret of stairway to heaven... this works no matter how it's spelled, bewitching as it is... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
your words have eyes...that always see more  M |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms maureen...thanks lady friend for your eyes ______________ ms catrina mmmm spellbound reply ms thanks to you |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
this is beautiful d- your ink colors me happy -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms susan then my ink is worthy of the shadows it makes thanks to you for your weave spend |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Well amigo... you never fail to intrigue me with your word play and to amaze me with the way you paint images and moments...always juxtaposed it seems in a bit of some real.... not sure why it puts someone off.... but I'm always wanting to read what you write... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
me thinks every thing you do is intentional ROTFLMAO and the way you paint? anyone would be honored to be your canvas.   |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Cpat...humble bows amigo you grace me with your reads...thanks guy. ______________ - GS, you need a good huggin...thanks lady for your touches |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I enjoyed this! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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