Open Poetry #34 |
Still Counting The Days |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Still Counting The Days Days turn into weeks Before I hear from you Do you count the days The way I always do I had waited patiently As the weeks pass by Here I am once again Hoping for your reply A chance I might hear My only way of coping If you are reading this I will continue hoping Imagine my emotions Each day I go through Still counting the days Not hearing from you HopeĀ©2005 |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And every day seems like it's decades long. *S* I hope you hear soon... I enjoyed the read! |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Hope, you write your inner feelings so well. I enjoy reading your work. Hugs, Ethel |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
sad but nice |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Understanding your ache. Hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Hope, I can hear the despair in your voice when I read this poem. Another fine poem you have done. |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
"Imagine my emotions Each day I go through Still counting the days Not hearing from you " Heartbreaker, this write. JL |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I know |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Hugs to all of you for your kind replies and understanding Hope |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very poignant. Eric |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
An old song badly misrepresented. On a day like today we cast the time away Seeking love letters in the sand You made a vowel that you would ever be true but somehow that vowel meant nothing to you Now my broken heart aches with every wave that breaks O'err our love letters In the sand Enjoyed your words Hope Dave |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Pain and longing fill your words...I hope the wait isn't much longer...*hugs* |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Hope, your aching heart again sings its song of melancholy .... very poignant, yes. May he feel this deep love and respond! Love and hugs. Margherita |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Aw... ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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