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Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

0 posted 2005-01-13 03:10 PM

Hi everyone I read these types of poems and they are fun to read. So I thought I would take a shot at it. Here it goes.

As I sit at the corner coffee shop enjoying the SUNSHINE, I find myself dreaming of someone that will whisk me away with a GENTLE SPIRIT. Who would he be? What would he look like? How would I meet him and where?

Would I meet him walking along the beach listening to the roars of the SEA. I cannot see his face, so faint and blurry. Like a DARK STRANGER in the MIDNITSUN. Would I meet him walking by him one evening near a romantic cafe next to a dark ALLI. I look back and only to find a small ALLICAT. Would he be a ROMANTIC HEART, or even a HOPELESS ROMANTIC GUY? Like country music, a GUNSLINGER and have a nice WRANGLRBUTT! Would it be in the winter toward the DARKER SEASON when it is SNOWing? Will he keep me warm and safe? Would we pull the NIGHTSHADE and snuggle together by the fireplace and feel the heat, no only from the fire but from the heat of our bodies embracing by telling each other our NAKDTHOUGHTS. Listening to some old songs like EARTH ANGEL or some from JONB. As he whispers that I am his ENCHANTRESS and he is my Knight.

Although TEARS OF LOVE stream down my face. Will I find this man who fills my dreams? There is someone for somebody, but what does that really mean.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

1 posted 2005-01-13 03:42 PM

You do this very well!
Enjoyed the read.
BIG SMILE
Thanks

JL

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

2 posted 2005-01-13 03:47 PM

This was sweet, and thanks for including me.
hugs, Chris

You said you'd give me light-
But you never told me about the fire
Stevie Nicks

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

3 posted 2005-01-13 03:50 PM

pssssst don't turn around..he is right behind you with his bad boy eyes on your wiggle walk..

kewl stuff niney...enjoyed it

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-01-13 03:52 PM

Yes, a charming read!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-13 06:56 PM

Haha...I like how you used my name!

Noone ever includes me when they write these things...I feel so special!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Cloud 9
Senior Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 980
Ca

6 posted 2005-01-13 07:21 PM

Thank you....I loved doing this. I really haven't had alot of time since I have started due to everything that is going on in my life. I am now venting my energy toward writing and hopes you that will all like it.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

7 posted 2005-01-13 09:36 PM

How cute.

Juju

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2005-01-13 09:55 PM

Great fun. I enjoy seeing the creativity that goes into these -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2005-01-13 10:04 PM

Well these are actually among my favorites here..I love it when folks get creative like this! It's very nice to be included in it too!!

I very much enjoyed yours!

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