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Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-01-12 09:02 PM

inadequate,
yes

my voice . . .

sometimes

when eloquence is sought
but simplicity is wrought
and I wish for a silver tipped pen
that would flow in filigree
and finery
but --

I see only the etchings
of a would be master
and I wonder . . .

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

1 posted 2005-01-12 09:07 PM

I do not see a would-be master Susan. You are very accomplished at putting to this paper canvas such lovely images. It touches mee deeply each time I pause a moment to read your works.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

2 posted 2005-01-12 09:15 PM

I liked this and felt the silver tip of that pen in it!

.....jo

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2005-01-12 09:19 PM

Susan, there is nothing other than pure, 100
percent quality that comes from your poetry.
All from the heart and totally sincere...
Those say much to me about the poet and person.

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

4 posted 2005-01-12 09:25 PM

On a junction escape screamed eloquence simplicity bareness baseness brought me friends who sought nothing else

In their minds they wrote their lives

that would flow in filigree
and finery
but --

I see only the etchings
of a would be master
and I wonder . . .

Words and I dont hope you mind my words.

You took me back to a film based around Clapham Junction.

regards

Dave

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

5 posted 2005-01-12 10:25 PM

Yeah I call days like that writers block and say hah for another day.

Juju

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2005-01-12 10:31 PM

i understand, i do

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

7 posted 2005-01-12 10:37 PM

Me too! I think darn big but can't put it into words

Susan, this was an excellent write.

Carpe' Diem

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

8 posted 2005-01-13 12:20 PM

You have penned silver and gold in this write.

JL

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2005-01-13 12:22 PM

Each reply touches me and what a gift I have in your friendships - I guess there are just times when it seems the flow does not flow and, well, I don't know - it's hard to put into words - love you all -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2005-01-13 12:31 PM

relating...
this hits home

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

11 posted 2005-01-13 12:42 PM

Dear Susan, you expressed this feeling masterfully.

Every now and then doubts arise .... but luckily they don't stay forever, otherwise who would write at all?

With every poem we attempt to convey adequately what we see or feel ... but perfection eludes us, perfection of what is is undescribable. But we can have glimpses of perfection and isn't that enough to rejoice?

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

12 posted 2005-01-13 01:06 PM

SEA - thanks for relating - hugs

Margherita - what wisdom you speak - thank you for your counsel - it is heart felt - hugs

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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