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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2005-01-12 04:31 PM

breaking glow sticks
stirring them into water
is love making just neon

that we dream with our eyes
or with our minds
when we are lover colors

you say your skin is new
now since I found it
and put it on backwards

to how it used to be
and those kids of hours
are really second lifetimes

making faces in the snow
then kissing hour mouths
in a dreamer's restless sleep

and only hour hands hold our only hours
_____________

Dark

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2005-01-12 04:33 PM

Oh man...absolutely terrific!

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

2 posted 2005-01-12 04:35 PM

good read

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2005-01-12 04:36 PM

With ya on this one.

JL

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2005-01-12 04:40 PM

Looking through curvy glass
watching sand fall up...

yes...

You "Aliced" this one!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-01-12 05:30 PM

Glow sticks and night diving - swimming in neon dreams - warm in the wet suit - yes - D - diggin' this -

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2005-01-12 05:32 PM

DS

You play with words like no other!!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2005-01-12 07:00 PM

This is so nicely written!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2005-01-12 07:19 PM

wonderful!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2005-01-12 10:42 PM

neon yellow is nice

i approve of the sudden change of face
xoxo

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2005-01-12 10:53 PM

enjoyed the word play tremendously

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2005-01-13 08:43 AM

I'm throwing my hands up against my forehead
weak with sighs

your amazing, talented and man, what a flute you play....your like the pied piper...

superb!

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2005-01-13 09:41 AM

I wish....in many ways and seasons...that I had written this.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

13 posted 2005-01-13 12:29 PM

damn.

tight spill, daddyman.

**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

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