Open Poetry #34 |
word touch love |
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I tremble beneath your word touch love when you whisper just there close to my ear but I feel your breath upon my neck moist with seduction sending shiver sin ripples d o w n m y s p i n e to pool in my belly and release in a sigh . . . s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Too nice! Excellent write Susan. JL |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
beautifully sensual. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
mmmmmmmmmm nice visuals suzzz may I write the words too on your skin with my whisper pen? |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you friends - your replies warm my heart - D - whisper away Hugs - S If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Now this is romantic...one of my favorites....James |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Lovely write... ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Filled with sensual heat...WOW!!! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you friends - your replies bring me warmth on this chilly day - Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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