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It's a Party - Come Celebrate!
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It's a Party - Come Celebrate! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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Come celebrate with me It’s a party – have a ball It’s the most incredible thing Cause for jubilee, one and all This most amazing gift I’ve been given So have you, my dear friend A treasure straight from Heaven Worth more than any wrought by man It’s not new, it’s been ours Yes we’ve had it from the start And if we care for it most carefully ‘twill be a long time before we part Listen . . . hear the music The notes dance most divine Mmmm – is that chocolate? And vintage from the vine? Ah, ‘tis rose breath that scents the air And there – it’s vanilla that does tease And the smell of you as you step close Oh my – it does please Feel the sway and motion As muscle and sinew move Play that funky music boy Let’s slip into the groove It’s a party – an occasion A red letter day! That such an amazing gift Should have been sent our way So jump, wiggle and shout Cry out in revelry Lift your arms and move about Let’s celebrate you and me For this gift, it costs no money Though valued beyond measure Yes- it is ours for free This fantabulous treasure See- Hear- Taste- Touch- Smell Know- We bear this treasure every day I think sometimes we forget Let’s celebrate our creation now Our bodys, our beings, this most incredible gift s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
yes it is a precious gift to those who have it and even more when given to another who wasn't given the total gift of life |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Nicely done but would you dance with me and my two left feet. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a very uplifting poem! just what I needed today! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
and uh if you have bionics too..it is so special...enjoyed this suzz...those things at the end of your fingertips are always more wonderful than the things we have to reach for. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Feel the sway and motion As muscle and sinew move Play that funky music boy Let’s slip into the groove the entire poem had me....but this was the best part for me...so much so, someone came over to my cube and sat me back down....ahhhh hem...cuz like I was dancin....hehe Oh well, thanks a bunch Susan...for helping me kick off my shoes and wiggle a little. Smiles and hugs |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This piece made me feel like the first day of Spring Susan!! All 'up' and ready to rock and roll. Very well done and I so much enjoyed the feeling it left me with! In the midst of winter, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan You started the music and I'm dancing. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Simple Abundance indeed !! wonderful. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
The joy and enthusiasm in the replies makes my day - thanks - sometimes you just feel so good you realize -hey - this is really an amazing creation I walk in - Hugs all - and morning  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent party! JL |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Susan Excellent words. Dave |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I enjoyed this! *smile* ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thanks for joining the party, friends - a toast to you- Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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