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Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

0 posted 2005-01-12 12:08 PM

Come celebrate with me
It’s a party – have a ball
It’s the most incredible thing
Cause for jubilee, one and all

This most amazing gift I’ve been given
So have you, my dear friend
A treasure straight from Heaven
Worth more than any wrought by man

It’s not new, it’s been ours
Yes we’ve had it from the start
And if we care for it most carefully
‘twill be a long time before we part

Listen . . . hear the music
The notes dance most divine
Mmmm – is that chocolate?
And vintage from the vine?

Ah, ‘tis rose breath that scents the air
And there – it’s vanilla that does tease
And the smell of you as you step close
Oh my – it does please

Feel the sway and motion
As muscle and sinew move
Play that funky music boy
Let’s slip into the groove

It’s a party – an occasion
A red letter day!
That such an amazing gift
Should have been sent our way

So jump, wiggle and shout
Cry out in revelry
Lift your arms and move about
Let’s celebrate you and me

For this gift, it costs no money
Though valued beyond measure
Yes- it is ours for free
This fantabulous treasure

See-
Hear-
Taste-
Touch-
Smell
Know-

We bear this treasure every day
I think sometimes we forget
Let’s celebrate our creation now
Our bodys, our beings, this most incredible gift

s.a.t.

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

MGROVES

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since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

1 posted 2005-01-12 01:37 AM

yes it is a precious gift to those who have it and even more when given to another who wasn't given the total gift of life

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

2 posted 2005-01-12 01:56 AM

Nicely done but would you dance with me and my two left feet.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-01-12 05:29 AM

a very uplifting poem! just what I needed today!

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2005-01-12 07:49 AM

and uh if you have bionics too..it is so special...enjoyed this suzz...those things at the end of your fingertips are always more wonderful than the things we have to reach for.

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2005-01-12 07:56 AM

Feel the sway and motion
As muscle and sinew move
Play that funky music boy
Let’s slip into the groove

the entire poem had me....but this was the best part for me...so much so, someone came over to my cube and sat me back down....ahhhh hem...cuz like I was dancin....hehe

Oh well, thanks a bunch Susan...for helping me kick off my shoes and wiggle a little.

Smiles and hugs

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2005-01-12 09:07 AM

This piece made me feel like the first day of Spring Susan!!
All 'up' and ready to rock and roll.
Very well done and I so much enjoyed the feeling it left me with!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

7 posted 2005-01-12 09:27 AM

Susan
You started the music and I'm dancing.

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2005-01-12 10:06 AM

Simple Abundance indeed !!
wonderful. hugs, Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2005-01-12 10:42 AM

The joy and enthusiasm in the replies makes my day - thanks - sometimes you just feel so good you realize -hey - this is really an amazing creation I walk in -

Hugs all - and morning

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2005-01-12 02:14 PM

Excellent party!

JL

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

11 posted 2005-01-12 03:58 PM

Susan

Excellent words.

Dave

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

12 posted 2005-01-12 07:19 PM

I enjoyed this! *smile*

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

13 posted 2005-01-12 07:40 PM

Thanks for joining the party, friends - a toast to you-

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

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