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‘Tis Stirring This Pressing of Flesh to Flesh
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‘Tis Stirring This Pressing of Flesh to Flesh |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279
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‘Tis Stirring This Pressing of Flesh to Flesh ‘Tis stirring this pressing of flesh to flesh, A polished, yea elegant comeliness, Sweet rhythmic timbre and fervor enmesh— —In pirouettes of enchanting finesse. Let not the cadence of a minuet, Trouble mine-ears, and confuse chaste joyance, With thee cherished heart the world I’d forget, As we revolve together, locked in dance. O' the waltzes of Strauss beckon dearest, Their lilting strains draw ever at my heart, A sensuality that knows not rest— —A timelessness that doth flow from fine art. Vienna thy strain is one of yearning— —Inglorious rapture. Two hearts burning. Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ok, so I'm really old, but you know what I saw? A mother, dancing to an unheard lullabye with her babe in her arms... just like I use to do... and I've just deemed this, a mother's  |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
"IN GLORIOUS RAPTURE. TWO HEARTS BURNING." WELL SAID NOW SET THE PEN ON THE DESK AND SLOWLY BACK AWAY DEAR SIR IM AFRAID IT'S FIXING BURST FROM YOUR PASSION. LOL |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Let not the cadence of a minuet, Trouble mine-ears, and confuse chaste joyance, With thee cherished heart the world I’d forget, As we revolve together, locked in dance."  this is really beautiful |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
As we revolve together, locked in dance. hmmmmm, boy I liked that....and picturing the Last Dance...what a doosie of a painting... O' the waltzes of Strauss beckon dearest, Their lilting strains draw ever at my heart, A sensuality that knows not rest— —A timelessness that doth flow from fine art. Sensuality that knows not rest~ Wow.... Vienna thy strain is one of yearning— —Inglorious rapture. Two hearts burning. ahhhh, can hear the gondaliers... What a journey you've taken us on here simply stunning! |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
perfectly written... swoon worthy as well as admiration. (i hope you're feeling better!! ~~hugs~~) ... ~snow btw.. never put your pen down. *s* "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
My Dear Kevin as the song goes.......Take my breath away. You certainly know how to do that one. Love this.Its beautiful. Hugs Amour Vous :-) Within this heart you'll find love |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Kevin this is a lovely! A perfect 'sigh maker'. Big hugs, Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Almost a song leaving these words. Dave |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write, and I agree with DavePage. Song-Like. JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Fantastic write!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
//Reminiscent of oldtime ballrooms and romance...Brings to life a vision of gentle beauty...Wonderful writing... |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
What an elegant waltz...breathless!  ....jo |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
A captivating read, wow, you do romance so well! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Waltzing to Strauss - dancing in the moonlight to Bethoven, taking a minute to minuet with Schubert - the intense passion of Wagner - the emotion of Tchikowsky - yes, EV2- the pressing of flesh - the feel of great composition - Enjoyed this greatly - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
tis' true, like a moth to a flame, so does your poetry attract....a burning light, drawing ever so near passionate hearts! thy words have burned, encrested a brand of romance upon these pages of blue. ~well done Sir William S. ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Kevin, your muse may leave at times, but when it comes back...it floors me! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful soul thou hast~ |
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