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0 posted 2004-12-28 11:10 PM

I Gift You These Words

She walks on the billow of loveliness,
Where hope and veracity coalesce,
How sweetly the wind caresses her cheek,
A kiss that sultry would leaveth me weak.

I yearn to hold her in a warm embrace,
To touch the porcelain skin of her face,
Yea my heart longs to beat in time with hers,
Likewise, I should confess, the mind concurs.

If dreams are desire then let me dream,
For they’re candy-coated peaches and cream,
‘Tis not ice castles I’m building from naught,
‘Tis a nursery of flowering thought.

I gift you these words may they gladden eye,
Speaking for the heart that’s terribly shy.

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

© Copyright 2004 Kevin R. Middleton - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-12-29 12:10 PM

such sweet words surely will softly caress her heart. i do love your words.

btw, i wrote you back from my other addy, i hope it went through.

"so I wait for you like a lonely house
till you will see me again and live in me.
Till then my windows ache"

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2 posted 2004-12-29 01:12 AM

Hey Sugar,
   Very sweet and warm.
   Printed this up.
  You certainly have a way of melting
Love this.


Amour Vous Always,


Within this heart you'll find love

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3 posted 2004-12-29 03:21 AM

excellent use of rhyme - bravo!
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4 posted 2004-12-29 04:12 AM sweet!...made me smile
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5 posted 2004-12-29 05:21 AM

heartfelt and tender Kevin

wonderful read

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6 posted 2004-12-29 07:08 PM

Fantastic write!


Happy Holidays!

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7 posted 2004-12-31 01:37 AM

such a sweet romantic - lovely this,


Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

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8 posted 2004-12-31 02:07 AM

Kevin, no better gift that this!  How beautiful!  (Have a happy new year!)
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9 posted 2004-12-31 02:22 AM

What a lovely gift...I'm sure she melted!

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10 posted 2005-02-27 07:11 AM

this would certainly cause one heart to melt~

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