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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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And suddenly a sadness stood beside me Unseen unheard and yet I knew her there Together we gazed at nothing No words were spoken I did not move No birds sang And sadly sadness turned away |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Sometimes it's hard to let go of her. Well done, John. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
one of your best, my friend... enjoyed this. jwesley |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very interesting and causes one to stop and ponder. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love your style I'll always read you |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
lovely writing sir |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
You always make me pause and ponder... Great write! |
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