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Open Poetry #34

Prison of My mind

CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa
Member

since 2003-07-16

Posts 248

0 posted 2005-01-11 02:19 PM

Awhile back I lost the key
to the prison of my mind
dont bother trying to rescue me
cause if you try you will find
that I'm stuck behind the walls
that I built around me
and now I'm suffocating
as if I were thrown into the sea
I trapped myself here
chained myself to this wall
blocked out everyone
cuz I was afraid to fall
it might be hard to break me
but look hard and you might find
that im finally trying to escape
from this prison in my mind

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

1 posted 2005-01-11 02:24 PM

Nice job on this one and if you need an acomplice in your escape then look no more.lol

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2005-01-11 03:51 PM

Excellent write. Terrible to think that builders build walls to keep others out, when all along they keep the very builder locked away from living. Break the rules. Break down the walls.

Enjoyed the read.

JL

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

3 posted 2005-01-12 06:04 PM

I like your words.

Dave

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA