Open Poetry #34 |
Prison of My mind |
CrAzI_bAbI_cHiKa Member
since 2003-07-16
Posts 248 |
Awhile back I lost the key to the prison of my mind dont bother trying to rescue me cause if you try you will find that I'm stuck behind the walls that I built around me and now I'm suffocating as if I were thrown into the sea I trapped myself here chained myself to this wall blocked out everyone cuz I was afraid to fall it might be hard to break me but look hard and you might find that im finally trying to escape from this prison in my mind |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
Nice job on this one and if you need an acomplice in your escape then look no more.lol |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write. Terrible to think that builders build walls to keep others out, when all along they keep the very builder locked away from living. Break the rules. Break down the walls. Enjoyed the read. JL |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I like your words. Dave |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
I think maybe we all have some prisons at one time or another in our lives. Enjoyed. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Good write! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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