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Freedom |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state 
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Patched larva molts into a winged adult the lake depths under larval assault Nice to surface once in a while from the depths of bondage the chains that keep you attached submerged to a murky cubicle where it is forbidden to chat you must watch the time spent in the can... Watery tombs lie beneath the attractive pitches that draw people to the land of the 'free' modern day slavery in the making a paradox is there's something worse besides the global induced fury to make money for somebody else. the larva yearns to be winged free itself from the depths of bondage chains and hooks of necessary employment where it is forbidden to chat and lives for that 'free' day. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Yep...welcome to the 21st century. I think my soul was happier in a long ago, simpler time. Well done once again. Chris  |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Each day can bring a renewing. Sometimes it just takes time to get to that day. Enjoyed the read. JL |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Can you rewrite this. Bottom section gets lost. Flights of fancy dont fly. Words are there but "it doesn't fly for me". Dave |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Very powerful statement. Bravo! |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed this Martin! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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