Open Poetry #34 |
Seed Catalogs |
ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Faith is almost lost When center-winter fills up space And time is when the brittle-stubble breaks, Dry and brown, above the frozen ground: * The garden is at rest, is colorless Except for gold of one old crookneck saved By ice from rotting, laying orphaned Where its mother-vine had made a summer nest. * But allowing spring flower-cloud- Billows to image, and raise up From sugar-plum, catalog images * Came in post today (summer dreams) of Bright green gages, and sugar-snap peas- Tomitillos, tomato colored pictures Red-purple-yellow, fruits and flowers All looking lovely, or drooling delicious. * The promise of summer-bounty, lifts Drooping spirits, morphs them several Months ahead into the future: I filled the blanks in, signed the scrap of paper And raised the flag, that begs for mans attention; Coped the drifts up-lane (knee-deep) Refilled with hope and faith, that spring Is just an order-form for seeds, away. * end [This message has been edited by ice (01-11-2005 08:23 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Ford, such hope such understanding and beauty you have scribed...for the good of all, a wise gift you have gifted us.... Oh so beautiful...so deeply moving. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I filled the blanks in, signed the scrap of paper And raised the flag, that begs for mans attention; ~*~ All of the poem was colorfully, mouth-watering wonderful... but I took a second meaning from the bolded line... even while I understood it to begin with... so I ask; a reprise of that line, woven into a new poem, with some entanglement throughout your garden vines...please? |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Where its mother-vine had made a summer nest. i wonder do they return to the same nest they made the spring before that still peeks from the arms of their summer respite? and those are catalogues of hope to me as i wait out the last frost. |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
We who slave to new seed vendors Gain our joy from fresh spring splendors. Pickin' and choosin' is our joy. Plants come up; we shout "OH BOY!" Nicely done! Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"I filled the blanks in, signed the scrap of paper And raised the flag, that begs for mans attention; Coped the drifts up-lane (knee-deep) Refilled with hope and faith, that spring Is just an order-form for seeds, away." Much enjoyed the read Ford.. Filled with so much color and hope. Thank you for making turn away from the snow outside and remember spring is just a breath away. Hugs, Nancy In the midst of winter, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
The garden is at rest, is colorless Except for gold of one old crookneck saved By ice from rotting, laying orphaned Where its mother-vine had made a summer nest. Exactly! My garden....you've been here? I can hardly wait for spring! Thanks for this ice. hugs, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Mmmm - love those catalogs - and in February i head to the conservatory where they will have all the spring bulbs in full glory - it certainly lifts the spirits - Enjoyed this muchly - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Like Kari said, very colourful and mouth-watering. Spring is beautiful. Enjoyed Maree into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
Hey Ford, Just got the gardening catalog to order new plants,bulbs. Only 2 months to go and I can't wait. :-) Love this piece. Within this heart you'll find love |
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