Open Poetry #34 |
That's the Way It Goes |
Gunslinger Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 901TX, USA |
Time just seems to soften, The edge of memory. And paint the colors pastel shades, Of back when I was free. The lonely nights seem warmer now, Than they seemed to be back then. Nostalgia creeps into my voice, With each, "Remember when...?" Each score goes up at least five points- Each bronc's a bit more rank. Bank statements now grown yellow, Don't match my memory "bank". The romance I remember- Was probably make-believe, I doubt I left a single love, To reminisce and grieve. But my honesty is private- A man must have his pride, And add a little luster, To each forgotten ride. I know a thousand "champions", Who were really also-rans, Who never made the Finals, And rode for half-filled stands. Who only went to Vegas, On the way to small time shows. But when you love the circuit, I guess that's the way it goes. |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
glory days eh the battle of best and man called an 8 second ride and it is funny how the older we get the better we were huh nice write |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
John, your poetry of your life touches me beyond words |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Morning cowboy.. Another fantastic write of true grit. You write as though you were speaking right to us. I enjoy that. Have a good day and a great week. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ In the midst of winter, |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
I echo my sister Enchantress's words. Hugging you, Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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froggy Senior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893Michigan |
I liked this one Gunslinger. :-) |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Magnificent...I bet you did leave loves to reminisce and grieve...a man with such passion in his heart couldn't help but leave many yearning hearts in his wake...Bravo, my friend...this poem is delightful...*hugs* |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed~ ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mr. Gun? You sir, are a classic storyteller. I wish I could buy you a drink. Very much enjoyed sir. |
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