Remember when...repost for blusie serenade

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2005-01-09 12:25 PM

Rembember when
the sun shone cancer free
and kissed your bones with vitamin D
and you swang shoeless as a mockingbird
with painted toes smiling into the sky,

and a field brimmed with all possibility
and you could balance on a cloud wisp
and stare into the dark with the
flight of a lightening bug;

remember when the grass climbed backwards
running away gleefully into the sky
and dreams flourished like bubbles
spreading across the ocean,
unclaimed and for the taking

remember when boys were still icky
and you and your friends snickered
at their awkwardness?

remember life
before a boy broke your heart?

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2005-01-09 12:43 PM

Rembember when
the sun shone cancer free
and kissed your bones with vitamin D
and you swang shoeless as a mockingbird
with painted toes smiling into the sky

Oh shoot and dayummm, yea I remember feeling all brand new, way back when.
You're such a sweetie goldielocks. I don't know what to say,
I'm kind of speechless, *sniff*

Could you puleeeze pass the kleenex before I make a spectacle of myself.

Big ol' hugs Michele, and thank you so so much.

saved_by_grace
Member

since 2005-01-08

Posts 332
In the arms of God...

2 posted 2005-01-09 12:44 PM

Wow...this was awesome! Thank you so much for sharing! Really takes a person back and it is SO true!

Becka

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

3 posted 2005-01-09 12:46 PM

what sweet remembrances of girlhood innocence

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2005-01-09 12:55 PM

did ever mention ye rock? aye..ye rock

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-09 01:34 AM

This is such an amazing write! Glad you reposted it!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-01-09 05:36 AM

this is

awesome

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2005-01-09 08:48 AM

kewl stuff ms

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

8 posted 2005-01-09 09:12 AM

Very well written.

believe in what your heart feels...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

9 posted 2005-01-09 09:13 AM

Pleeeaase, don't ever leave PiP! I love reading your poetry sooooo much!

This poem kinda choked me up with warm memories of my girlhood before I had my first broken heart.

~ May your heart never be broken again!

Linda

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

10 posted 2005-01-09 09:18 AM

Michele a wonderful write...and one completely understood

hugs to you and Lori

M

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

11 posted 2005-01-09 10:30 AM

enjoyed

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

12 posted 2005-01-09 10:44 AM

This...hard to read at the moment...in some moments it's hard to read anything...but beautiful all the same.

I haven't been a very good PIPster lately, barely here at all except to post my own little wails....but I'm glad I came here this morning.

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