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John B
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since 2002-07-02

Posts 68
Texas, USA

0 posted 2005-01-08 09:20 PM

This is how much I thought I knew you. I hand you over my bridges. Don't burn them down. Don't break them down. Let them take you places. Somewhere warm somewhere welcome. Somewhere we could meet and be good friends one day. I don't want to have to die to meet you but I am. I hand you over my bridges
Don't burn them down. Don't break them now. Let them take you places.

i will be of one command.
sometimes it's the hardest thing you can do.

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2005-01-08 09:45 PM

I hand you over my bridges

Now there's a thought, and I like it a lot!

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2005-01-08 09:46 PM

Hi John

Your poem made me feel sad....and also made me think. I think everyone has their own bridges, ya know...made from the small and large terror or joy that has been their own. So, I don't think you can give your bridges....but I'm glad that you made me think about it. I wish you well.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2005-01-08 10:07 PM

good one

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2005-01-09 12:14 PM

You expressed it very well, I am at this place and the gate to the bridge has just been closed and locked~

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

5 posted 2005-01-09 12:20 PM

I like this concept very much - handing another your bridges - great thought

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

6 posted 2005-01-09 01:37 AM

This is nicely written! Enjoyed~

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

7 posted 2005-01-09 02:55 AM

As Martie mentions your bridges are yours to keep; you may help someone get across one
as you would help one to gain access to something new but that is different...keep writing about how life affects you

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

8 posted 2005-01-09 07:03 AM

Welcome back, John. A pondering write..
do some more of it, please...

it's been a while!

John B
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 68
Texas, USA

9 posted 2005-01-10 10:37 AM

I'll try. As for handing over your bridges I'm laughing my butt off inside my head. I think you can hand anyone anything. Here's my gift there goes your hand. That's what I think of that response about not being able to hand over your bridges. Man is able to move mountains. Why not a bridge?
I luv ya all though. I think it's halarious. You just gave me writer's block.

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