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| Open Poetry #34 |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal 
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Black is the deep of the coming night Shadowed from moon’s bright glow Where all colors seep in to one Creating the mysteries unknown Black holds treasures oft unseen Hidden from casual pry Where beauty as a rose doth grow Apparent only to seeking eye Black is the feel of velvet wrap The warmth of sainted womb Wherein crying soul may hide From gray of pending doom Black is the hue which guards the door To fragile and tender heart tears Camouflage from the calloused assault That many an assailant would bear Black is the garment in which I attire For in its sleek sweep flow I silhouette the breadth of me Letting only my shallows show Black is the deep of the coming night Shadowed from moon’s bright glow Where all colors seep in to one Creating the mysteries unknown s.a.t. If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You wear the color well, Susan~ I liked the velvet wrap, and the warmth it lends most of all. Looking good on you lady~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Susan, I like the color black in clothes especially. This is beautiful, though it does feel sad. You are such a good writer, you can make even sad beautiful.. Hugs, Ethel |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Have done a poem too on a black colour theme, there's so much to refer to...enjoyed your interpretation. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love the color black! ~ Well, actually, black is the absence of color! It expresses the yin in me. I also love white which is the reflection of all colors and it is an expression of the yang in me. You have done a wonderful job of showing the mysterious and calming aspects of black. I love your poetry! It is so varied in style, mood, and theme! Big hugs, Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welll done! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
you did it well wrapping yourself nocturnally in the dark, revealing enough |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
I wear black socks with my tennies when I do my dork routine to impress a new date enjoyed this ms suzz |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Susan, I just noticed your new photo! It's fabulous! I had been missing your "Mona Lisa" photo, but this one is also terrific! Loveya! Linda |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
You paint the color of softness majestically Susan. Excellent write. TD |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah, thank you may friends - for your comments and for letting me know you stopped by - I do so enjoy hearing from you - and the encouragement is a gift - Good morning all - and hugs -  SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Enjoyed this Susan! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Sounds like Wonder Woman but then it is. Nice images. dave |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes Susan, Black is the garment in which I attire For in its sleek sweep flow I silhouette the breadth of me Letting only my shallows show all of that, and more...is you. And I thank you very much for the new pic. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Thank you friends for your replies - you truly warm my heart and I do so enjoy hearing from you - Dave - you make me smile with the wonder woman comment  Hugs - Susan btw - Barry - thanks dear Sir -  If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...some people wear lots of black...I do occasionally...and then you have Tahitian black pearls....James |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was absolutely beautiful...and couldn't help but think while reading, how much I love the night...it's gloriously mysterious and comforting to sit outside and allow it to wrap itself around you....with the stars for a ceiling...and the sounds of summer nights, eveloping your whole being...Nature is certainly incredible. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
thank you James - black pearls - sounds lovely - black coral is exquisite too - LeeJ - you make me long for the bliss of the deck upon summer's eve - your reply pretty in itself - thank you Hugs - Susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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