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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Lesson Learned Laughter and music Sadness and shame Have all crossed my eyes Yet, time is to blame? Softness of shadows Structures of steel Boulders and earth Are mine to reveal Colors emulate life Actions in living Faith and giving Yet, love causes strife? What manner of speech should be in the fruit? The trunk of the tree the branch or the leaf? The seed is life giving yet must die to its living possessing all of its flavor from earth’s nutrient savor… Lesson learned must first be earned… |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Life is filled with so many lessons...as we age we hopefully learn from them all...Wonderfully said... |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Understanding this fully....lessons in love hurt the most... Wonderful wisdom shared~ ~ARH  Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely written JL. Much enjoyed the read. Hugs~ In the midst of winter, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
JL The conflict between things, gives much wisdom...I see that you know that. A great poem! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how true so true well written! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Those who are very smart always realize every day is a lesson, and always something must be learned... Even what we think we know is always expounded upon... Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
From reading many of your poems, I'd say you have learned from your lessons in life. Life, at times, is referred to as "the school of hard knocks". You are one who will one day graduate with honors!  Love & Light, EA |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Yes in deedy - wise words well written - SusanIf I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Amazing logic here my friend...with a lesson in itself...thank you and Good Morning, wishing you a great day! |
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