Open Poetry #34 |
My eyes ever flowing for you |
Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
The tears my eyes shed is ever flowing like mighty mississippi,my hurt is deeper then the grand cayon. My heart is breaking and I don't know what to do. I will not ever see those eye's again. Dear lord what do I do when I am losing my love?, The one I truly beilieve I'm supost to be with.. His hands I will no longer touch, his kiss I will miss so much,the tides of the waves go in and out,why did he have to come and bother me,I could of done without. To be with you I'd do anything that I could, climb moutains in the snow,pray to god to take my soul just to have one more kiss One more kiss with you please is all im asking Toture why oh why am I being toutured?,ironic irony at is best. I must of done something to desever this distrest. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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saved_by_grace Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332In the arms of God... |
What a beautiful write. Brought out the very emotion in me...my heart breaks. Thanks for sharing your heart. |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
this is sad - it sweeps sorrow - it stirs compassion susan If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . . |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
It brings tears to the soul to feel the pain of loss in your words...*hugs* may spring come early to your heart... |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
well the story is i fell for a navy guy and that was stupid,he is getting transferred so ill never see him again Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang heart-breaking |
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Soulfisher Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226where ever the fly fishing is good |
FOXY OASIS WHAT A DESCRIPTION OF LOSS THOUGHT SOMEONE HAD DIED THEN I REALIZED IT WAS A SAILOR SO ONLY LEAVING NICELY DONE |
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