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Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

0 posted 2005-01-09 06:34 PM



The tears my eyes shed is ever flowing
like mighty mississippi,my hurt is deeper
then the grand cayon. My heart is breaking
and I don't know what to do.


I will not ever see those eye's again.
Dear lord what do I do when I am losing
my love?, The one I truly beilieve I'm
supost to be with..

His hands I will no longer touch,
his kiss I will miss so much,the tides
of the waves go in and out,why did he
have to come and bother me,I could of
done without.

To be with you I'd do anything that I could,
climb moutains in the snow,pray to god to take
my soul just to have one more kiss

One more kiss with you please is all im asking


Toture why oh why am I being toutured?,ironic
irony at is best. I must of done something to
desever this distrest.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


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saved_by_grace
Member
since 2005-01-08
Posts 332
In the arms of God...
1 posted 2005-01-09 07:18 PM


What a beautiful write.  Brought out the very emotion in me...my heart breaks.  Thanks for sharing your heart.  
Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2005-01-09 10:30 PM


this is sad - it sweeps sorrow - it stirs compassion

  susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Startime55
Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada
3 posted 2005-01-09 10:38 PM


It brings tears to the soul to feel the pain of loss in your words...*hugs* may spring come early to your heart...

Foxyoasis
Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla
4 posted 2005-01-09 10:49 PM


well the story is i fell for a navy guy and that was stupid,he is getting transferred so ill never see him again

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2005-01-10 06:30 AM


dang

heart-breaking

Soulfisher
Member
since 2005-01-07
Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good
6 posted 2005-01-10 06:43 AM


FOXY OASIS WHAT A DESCRIPTION OF LOSS THOUGHT SOMEONE HAD DIED THEN I REALIZED IT WAS A SAILOR SO ONLY LEAVING NICELY DONE
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