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DavePage
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0 posted 2005-01-08 02:42 PM


You looking over your shoulder

2 ¼  dear

On a watershute Carnival Queen

2 ¼ dear

Slung around my gut and working from same

2 ¼ game

I believed my vision of the world would be my brain

2 ¼ same

Withouth my mind

2 ¼ blind

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Susan
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1 posted 2005-01-08 03:43 PM


Interesting this - I smiled - not sure I get the whole gist of it - but still, I smiled -

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

JL
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2 posted 2005-01-08 04:13 PM


And 100% wonderful.  Way to go DavePage.
Great write

JL

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3 posted 2005-01-08 10:44 PM


I like this Dave - made me think!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Ericc
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4 posted 2005-01-09 02:59 PM


Excellent write Dave...takes the
reader to the edge of thought.


Eric

DavePage
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5 posted 2005-01-09 04:23 PM


Thanks

2 1/4 is a negative size - it lets you capture in hig definition a large area and in the darkroom you can cut out what you.

The problem when I did this kind of stuff was that you asked people before you took the photographs.

You didn't lie, con, threaten, assault or invade.

You just took a wide area photograph and did it in the darkroom.

dave

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