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Winter's Savor
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Winter's Savor |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Winter’s Savor coarse sea salt appears to dress each surface crystalline stars, lacy diamonds cling to the chill of this morning extremely fine “sodium chloride” seems to be seasoning our world giving it a cool, crisp flavor easy to appreciate this side of the glass ©January 8, 2004 Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes indeed! |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
It started brilliantly and as the urge rose for the next set of words it had ended. Please write the flow. Dave |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Ah yes, tis the season - or is it seasoning?  Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
Ah yes...the beautiful reality of a crisp morning living by the ocean...I remember it well...Stunning... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, all, glad you enjoyed. And Startime, I'm quite a ways inland, 230 miles minimum from the closest coast. However, the snow or ice or a combination of whatever is out there today closed resembled coarse sea salt. That's why I used...appears to be...  Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I enjoyed this VAS!  ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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