»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #34
»
after thought
| Open Poetry #34 |
|
after thought |
|
|
Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
|
later when it is over and the day is behind you like my eyes are in your mind will you whisper then yes my love take me to our eden and dance me there just until morning will you ask your eyes to run from the sand man lest sleep comes between us and builds a window where we can only look and not touch where the heat of us is only in dreams and the glass is a chill later when it is over and the night is behind you like my eyes are in your mind will you whisper then yes my love stay with me in our eden and dance me there just until the evening _________________ Dark |
||
| © Copyright 2005 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Nah... she's got to ask for a much longer time...  Very good, Sir! |
||
|
Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
I agree 100 percent with Kari.... me thinks she should stay all night... and maybe even the next morning  I've been reading you for how long now.... oh yeah, that would be almost like telling my age... but in all that time you have never disapointed, and always pleased.. did I ever tell you just how much I enjoy everything you write....lol... yeah, I GUESS I have... a couple hundred times or so. I enjoy this side of you D.... SLOW HUGS |
||
|
Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I agree not nearly enough time, Good write. ~Jen Freedom is not Free (Korean War memorial) |
||
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
mmmmmmmmmmmm...... worthy of lip licks. "so I wait for you like a lonely house |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very nice |
||
|
LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Expression of Love Nights in Eden with you were always more then itself A wonder beyond words, along with the fear and excitement But there was always thoughts of what will be, when we part I then, couldn't remember what wrapped warm my heart... Then some Godly force broke through a lifelong wall of leaves reminding me, whispering life isn't what it seems Humans seem to always want more Oh, it isn't their fault but simply their composure When a heart is true of love fingers walk within guiding the two to one regardless of time spent Be joyous for not the human pleasure nor the choice to give But for the spiritual connection that only God himself could give Love allows and then some or'r time of mystery It is the expression which lasts for an eternity So if she truly loves you, and you her, you both will seek the treasure of give and take so near... Ahhh, my friend, if we could only forget ourselves, and think about every human being as such, how different this world would be....wouldn't it? Love to you and yours a wonderful write |
||
|
babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
damn that's niiice, dark. **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
||
|
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Just until the evening while the shadows are bare Happy New Year to you Dark One. Loved it..Victoria |
||
|
Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
mmmmmmmmmm sounds like 'round the clock to me... delicious, D K |
||
|
Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Eden awaits the lovers steps to embrace their precence and hold them close within her bounty she's open 24/7 even if only in dreams - loved this D - very much -  SusanEvery action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
||
|
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
dreams are only dreams give me skin please |
||
|
arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
enjoyed arthur |
||
|
Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS Very romantically enjoyed!  |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
