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Soulfisher
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since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

0 posted 2005-01-08 08:32 AM

AS I RESTED AGAINST A BOLDER
IN RHYTHMIC CAST OF TEN AND TWO
I SENT A TIGHT LOOP IN SILENCE
TO HTE EDDYING TIDES OF TIME
WITH GENTLE LANDINGS
AND PERFECT PRESENTATIONS
MY RHYTHMS WILL SOON SEDUCE-
A LIFE-
PAINTED IN GREEN, FALLING TO GOLD
DOUSED-
WITH SPOTS OF FIRE CIRCLED
IN BLACK
I SENT
A SHADOW CAST IN SEARCH OF YOU
WITH
TIPS AND LIPS SEETHINGLY, ARCHING
ATOP
THE BARRIER OF BLUE
AS A BREATH OF AIR BEGAN TO STIR
IT CARRIED WITH IT THE SCENTS
OF PINE AND HONEYSUCKLE
SOFTLY
I WISPERED, COME-
LAY IN MY CREEL
AND KNOW
HUGER NO MORE
NOR-WILL I-...

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-01-08 08:42 AM

Welcome to Passions, Soulfisher! Please,
check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises...

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2005-01-08 09:07 AM

Welcome to Passions!
I'm sure you will love it here.
I'm looking forward to seeings more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
an invincible summer.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2005-01-08 09:12 AM

Soulfisher
Interesting write, enjoyed the read.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2005-01-08 09:18 AM

ah...pine and honeysuckle

sigh

Welcome to Passions. Glad you could join us.

if you don't mind me saying in kindness, one little thing I would suggest to you to make your work easier for the reader is to ditch the caps and use lower case lettering

again, welcome! I'm looking so forward to reading more of your works!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2005-01-08 09:37 AM

Welcome to Passions.
This is one of the most refreshing, sensual and best written poems I have read in quite some time. I truly look forward to reading your works, and appreciate that you are sharing them here, with all of us.
ThisDiamond

Soulfisher
Member

since 2005-01-07

Posts 226
where ever the fly fishing is good

6 posted 2005-01-08 09:38 AM

THANKS EVERYONE FOR MAKING ME FEEL WELCOME HERE AND POSTING YOUR FEED BACK. THANKS FOR THE EMAIL SUNSHINE. AND IM SORRY BOUT THE WHOLE CAPS LOCK THING AS I AM JUST TO LAZY TO HIT THE SHIFT KEY AS NEEDED. HAVE A WONDERFUL WEEKEND EVERONE

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

7 posted 2005-01-08 09:44 AM

Welcome. I enjoyed this write. And look forward to reading many more.

believe in what your heart feels...

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

8 posted 2005-01-08 10:13 AM

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2005-01-08 11:38 AM

"IT CARRIED WITH IT THE SCENTS
OF PINE AND HONEYSUCKLE
SOFTLY
I WISPERED, COME-
LAY IN MY CREEL
AND KNOW
HUGER NO MORE
NOR-WILL I-... "

Welcome to Pip! I enjoyed your first post.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

10 posted 2005-01-08 11:49 AM

Welcome to PiP!! Your love of fly fishing surely was the inspiration here. If you feel using the shift key is too much trouble, then by all means write in all lower case. Hope to read more from you.

bslicker

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since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

11 posted 2005-01-08 12:53 PM

Welcome !!!!!

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

12 posted 2005-01-08 12:58 PM

Like the images painted...this seems to be one that would fit well with Gentle Spirit's Color Challenge...don't know if you intended such.

I especially love the ending...to know "hunger" no more. A wonderful hope to present.

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

13 posted 2005-01-08 01:14 PM

Soulfisher

I have written the rhythm and music of fishing many times...loved this poem of yours! Welcome to Passions!

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

14 posted 2005-01-08 04:43 PM

Welcome to Passions...the people here are some of the very best you will ever come across and I know your words will bring pleasure to everyones reading experience...Your poem brings to mind wonderful visions of water and the peace that comes when one is one with natures world...thank you...

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

15 posted 2005-01-08 04:55 PM

AS A BREATH OF AIR BEGAN TO STIR
IT CARRIED WITH IT THE SCENTS
OF PINE AND HONEYSUCKLE
SOFTLY
I WISPERED, COME-
LAY IN MY CREEL
AND KNOW
HUGER NO MORE
NOR-WILL I-...

Love this...smiling, Welcome to PIP.

Maree

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

16 posted 2005-01-08 07:45 PM

you've caught a lot of poets on your fishing line
now smile, as you reel'em in

welcome to Passions!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

17 posted 2005-01-08 08:38 PM

It's good to read you here, Soulfisher.
Welcome to Passions~

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

18 posted 2005-01-08 11:34 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS WILLIAM!
THIS IS SUCH A GREAT FIRST POST!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

19 posted 2005-01-08 11:36 PM

Welcome to Passions, may you find comfort and friendship here!

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

20 posted 2005-01-09 09:08 AM

S-Fisher
Nice to see a fellow fisherman here...
I fish through the ice for the most part, but in the last few weeks the ice is unsafe...

"PAINTED IN GREEN, FALLING TO GOLD
DOUSED-
WITH SPOTS OF FIRE CIRCLED
IN BLACK"

I use a jig with those colors now, fishing for walleyes in open water..

enjoyed the poem

____________ice/ford
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TexUS
Member

since 2003-03-20

Posts 228

21 posted 2005-01-09 10:21 PM

An awesome write!

Truly enjoyed this, thanks

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

22 posted 2005-01-09 10:37 PM

A SHADOW CAST IN SEARCH OF YOU
WITH
TIPS AND LIPS SEETHINGLY, ARCHING
ATOP
THE BARRIER OF BLUE
AS A BREATH OF AIR BEGAN TO STIR
IT CARRIED WITH IT THE SCENTS
OF PINE AND HONEYSUCKLE
SOFTLY
I WISPERED, COME-
LAY IN MY CREEL
AND KNOW
HUGER NO MORE
NOR-WILL I-...
What a beautiful write this is. Being the hopeless
romantic that I am, I almost forgot that you were
writing about fishing. LOL

Welcome to Passions, William. I hope that you will
enjoy your time here at PIP.
Hugs,
Ethel (garysgirl)

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

23 posted 2005-01-10 03:05 PM

THE BARRIER OF BLUE
"AS A BREATH OF AIR BEGAN TO STIR
IT CARRIED WITH IT THE SCENTS
OF PINE AND HONEYSUCKLE
SOFTLY
I WISPERED, COME-
LAY IN MY CREEL
AND KNOW
HUGER NO MORE
NOR-WILL I-... "

Nice! Enjoyed the read. Keep them coming.

JL

MGROVES

Member Elite

since 2004-02-01

Posts 3802
california

24 posted 2005-01-11 03:46 AM

wow awesome and welcome to passions

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

25 posted 2005-01-11 04:13 PM

welcome to the passion

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