Light - final rewrite of the In your Soul words

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Open Poetry #34

Light - final rewrite of the In your Soul words

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

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0 posted 2005-01-10 02:54 PM

Light

To touch a moment’s light illuminating from a feather that fell in one glorious moment

Seeking breath to fly winds fluttering on a breeze on a thought that danced with thoughts and dreams

In your soul on a moonlit night would your eyes frighten a candle your thoughts espoused in the light of a dark night

Are you the one glorifying the evening to die for your words lighting the day

Would you be sad at this moment of truth and courage, to dream crescents of gentle images surrounding a world fractionally at peace

Would you move your array of blinding essence of today's thoughts, last night's passion to dismissal of fragments of bliss

Would you desire a bright sun seeking fragrance enveloped by music and percussion of restless breaths and ideas to warm a feeling of earth sacrifice within a feeling

Would you echo streams of living and dying fire burning hot in a strange cauldron as you watch a child blazing arise from the cauldron

Throwing essence across a sun dressed in a visage of a world you never knew as you fear understanding more than fear

JL
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1 posted 2005-01-10 02:59 PM

Your words are a glow in this “Light”
Very nice DavePage.

JL

LeeJ
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2 posted 2005-01-10 03:02 PM

what a tribute...outstanding write David

DavePage
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3 posted 2005-01-10 04:19 PM

Thanks.

This one will now be left alone.

Dave

MGROVES

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4 posted 2005-01-11 03:54 AM

excellant

MGROVES

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5 posted 2005-01-11 02:05 PM

had to come back

Susan
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walking the surreal

6 posted 2005-01-11 02:39 PM

Powerful - touching - incredible imagery

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

7 posted 2005-01-11 05:16 PM

Thanks all.

I often have dreams of submitting words for contests but words are fleeting and should fly, not to be kept in a vacuum nor be restricted as to who can see them.

regards

Dave

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