primal yellow (Gentle Spirit's color challenge)

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

0 posted 2005-01-07 10:36 PM

Listen to a primal scream.

YELLOW

shouts itself triumphantly
from the vibrant sunflower,
boldly challenging the almighty Sun
for power and glory,
then reluctantly casts
its brilliance aside
to become
earthy
rich

BROWN

as it falls down
from its throne,
another transient
of planet earth.

*
Thanks Donna, Gentle Spirit, for the inspiration!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2005-01-07 10:39 PM

Oh WOW!! Love this Kacy!
Challenge well met here.
Hugs~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2005-01-07 10:46 PM

hehe, thanks Nancy, it was fun to do this, a good challenge for me, as I rarely post in anything other than the standard navy blue

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2005-01-07 10:47 PM

i see the yellow dandelions
shouting as they are
birthing from the brown earthwomb
then returning to her when they
have reached the season's ascention

nice colorama

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2005-01-07 10:49 PM

Hey lady, loved your color palette presentation.

happy Friday night, Mish!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2005-01-07 11:04 PM

Brava Kacy!! Well done and enjoyed. Chris

~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~
Gustavo Adolfo Becquer

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-01-08 01:41 PM

wonderful!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2005-01-08 03:16 PM

Yes! That's the song of the sunflower,
exactly! Ah, excellent writing, Kacy!

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

8 posted 2005-01-08 03:50 PM

I like this a lot!

Enjoyed

Susan

Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

9 posted 2005-01-08 04:23 PM

WOW!!! I felt the scream of yellow settle into the whisper of earthy brown...I love the feel of this poem...it is wonderful....

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

10 posted 2005-01-08 04:24 PM

Good one.

JL

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

11 posted 2005-01-08 06:08 PM

Great write Kacy!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

12 posted 2005-01-09 12:00 PM

Cool, Kacy!
Challenge or not,
I like this a lot!

e

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

13 posted 2005-01-10 12:18 PM

Very nice Kacy!!

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

14 posted 2005-01-10 02:12 PM

Very, very good writing, Kacy. You
met the challenge well!!

Hugs,
Ethel

John B
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 68
Texas, USA

15 posted 2005-01-10 02:18 PM

it's got 2050 written all over it.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

16 posted 2005-01-10 02:50 PM

fabulous write Kacy

Happy Monday

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.