Open Poetry #34 |
primal yellow (Gentle Spirit's color challenge) |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Listen to a primal scream. YELLOW shouts itself triumphantly from the vibrant sunflower, boldly challenging the almighty Sun for power and glory, then reluctantly casts its brilliance aside to become earthy rich BROWN as it falls down from its throne, another transient of planet earth. * Thanks Donna, Gentle Spirit, for the inspiration! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh WOW!! Love this Kacy! Challenge well met here. Hugs~ In the midst of winter, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
hehe, thanks Nancy, it was fun to do this, a good challenge for me, as I rarely post in anything other than the standard navy blue |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i see the yellow dandelions shouting as they are birthing from the brown earthwomb then returning to her when they have reached the season's ascention nice colorama |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hey lady, loved your color palette presentation. happy Friday night, Mish! |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Brava Kacy!! Well done and enjoyed. Chris ~The soul that can speak through the eyes can also kiss with a gaze~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Yes! That's the song of the sunflower, exactly! Ah, excellent writing, Kacy! |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I like this a lot! Enjoyed Susan Every action generates a force that returns to us in like kind . . . let us choose compassion and love |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!! I felt the scream of yellow settle into the whisper of earthy brown...I love the feel of this poem...it is wonderful.... |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Good one. JL |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Great write Kacy! ~Alli~ Happy 2005! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Cool, Kacy! Challenge or not, I like this a lot! e |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nice Kacy!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Very, very good writing, Kacy. You met the challenge well!! Hugs, Ethel |
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John B Member
since 2002-07-02
Posts 68Texas, USA |
it's got 2050 written all over it. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
fabulous write Kacy Happy Monday |
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