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Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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0 posted 2005-01-06 04:27 PM

It's quiet.

And few words slip past to
reach the fingers.

I write only what has
fallen.

Returning to the silence of
this poem.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-01-06 04:28 PM

*shaking my head*

How DO you do this?

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2005-01-06 04:28 PM

This is so beautiful and soft done in so few words, PERFECTLY. Well done Eric!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2005-01-06 04:45 PM

Magic...simply magical!!

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2005-01-06 04:51 PM

Full circle... yes. *S* Beautiful work!

*Alli4000*

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since 2004-03-21

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The World of Poetry

5 posted 2005-01-06 05:51 PM

Eric...this is perfect!!!

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

6 posted 2005-01-06 05:55 PM

I enjoy reading your poetic perceptions of love and life!

Love & Light,
Linda

SEA

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with you

7 posted 2005-01-06 06:03 PM

this made me think of two people in love..holding hands...

wonderful

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2005-01-06 09:32 PM

in awe

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

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my own state

9 posted 2005-01-06 10:28 PM

Silence expressed in as few words as needed..keep up the style

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

10 posted 2005-01-07 05:27 PM

There is a beautiful flow of harmony in the quietness you evoke, dear Eric.

*
Words falling

like snow crystals,

you catch them

and they dissolve

on your fingers,

while you quietly

record

their ethereal beauty

offered

in a silent

gesture of love.

*
I love you.
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

11 posted 2005-01-07 10:59 PM

What is expressed through the fingertips is perhaps the purest of all thought put to deed.
Excellent.
TD

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

12 posted 2005-01-07 11:05 PM

*sigh*

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

13 posted 2005-01-08 04:41 AM

another beautiful one, Eric.
You make all the ladies swoon,
with your soft, romantic words.
Hugs,
Ethel

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

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Forever In Your Heart

14 posted 2005-01-08 11:35 PM

even though your poem is titled quiet, it speaks volumes~

**Sighing**

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

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South Carolina, USA

15 posted 2005-01-09 09:42 PM

Eric, you write the simple and ordinary
so eloquently and perfectly...saying volumes
in but a breath. Thank You.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

16 posted 2005-01-09 09:44 PM

ThisDiamond
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Michigan, USA

17 posted 2005-01-09 09:52 PM

So beautiful.
TD

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

18 posted 2005-01-09 10:15 PM

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Startime55
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since 2003-04-05

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Alberta, Canada

19 posted 2005-01-09 10:21 PM

*sigh* a gentle caress of words from your fingers leaves one wanting more...Beautiful...

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

20 posted 2005-01-10 07:07 AM

Eric, the translation of this speaks volumns, marvelous thoughts....soft and snuggly

nn
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21 posted 2005-01-10 02:40 PM

So nice

John B
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since 2002-07-02

Posts 68
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22 posted 2005-01-10 02:44 PM

Member elite says it all.

i will be of one command.
sometimes it's the hardest thing you can do.

JL
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since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

23 posted 2005-01-10 02:48 PM

Good one Ericc.

JL

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