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DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

0 posted 2005-01-06 03:09 PM

In a mass of freedom
I echoed boundary
Hemming myself in with vision

Why should I be so cursed
In ignorance I had no boundaries
Only the chance to go forward

Now I have learnt
I have only boundaries
To stop me

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2005-01-08 03:42 PM

Radar, sixth sense, gut feel...

red flags...

all of these came to mind with this mass...

and message.

Thank you, David.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

2 posted 2005-01-08 04:15 PM

With knowledge comes responsibility.
So true DavePage.
Excellent write.

JL

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2005-01-08 04:18 PM

It's amazing how we give ourselfs boundaries as we grow in knowledge...Wonderfully said...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2005-01-09 08:11 PM

NIce...James

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2005-01-09 11:42 PM

Freedom seems to be a key word for me lately~
your poem about it speaks to me...

~ARH

Come,love all of me, mind, body, spirit..feel my passion, taste of me, be filled completely!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2005-01-10 06:24 AM

nice Dave

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2005-01-10 07:01 AM

it is perhaps the way for all of us, kinda the same, and yet finally tailored to fit each own persons need....marvelous painting here

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

8 posted 2005-01-10 12:17 PM

i have only boundaries to stop me..

but they wont stop me

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

9 posted 2005-01-10 12:55 PM

Thanks all.

Mass of Freedom led to Boundaries on a different slight of ideas - Sight of Self is badly written nonsense and I need to bring all three together as Boundaries.

regards

Dave

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

10 posted 2005-01-10 01:47 PM

Hey Dave,
I really really like this one.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

DavePage
Member Elite

since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

11 posted 2005-01-10 03:01 PM

Thanks Froggy - I am in the process of the rewrite.

Dave

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