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Open Poetry #34

end/beginning 4/5

Krawdad
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0 posted 2005-01-07 09:42 PM

                     end/beginning
                       4/5

                     Thru my wide bedroom window
                     drizzled as it is in ice
                     domes a cold blue sky
                     An old tattered spruce
                     stands crisp and hard
                     unmoved nearby



                     e

Martie

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California

1 posted 2005-01-07 09:48 PM

Krawdad

I can see this! A poignant view from that window. I hope you are warm inside.

Midnitesun

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Gaia

2 posted 2005-01-07 10:01 PM

vivid!
well done, poet Krawdad

Juju
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In your dreams

3 posted 2005-01-07 10:20 PM

I like this one

JUJU

babygirlwlove
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New York City

4 posted 2005-01-08 10:44 AM

::feeling the spruce bristles in this::

peace,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

passing shadows
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displaced

5 posted 2005-01-08 01:32 PM

what a view!

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2005-01-08 03:40 PM

Yes...it's been
just so...

well done, Sir!

*Alli4000*

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The World of Poetry

7 posted 2005-01-08 11:16 PM

Very nice Krawdad...

~Alli~

Happy 2005!

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

8 posted 2005-01-09 12:41 PM

beautiful image sir

Susan
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walking the surreal

9 posted 2005-01-09 12:48 PM

I can see this and admire the tree's fortitude

Susan

If I wander far enough, long enough, will I finally know . . .

Krawdad
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10 posted 2005-01-10 01:18 PM

Thank you all for stoping by.
The pen is really dry these days . . .

e

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